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A new homework, please help me correct it! Dear President, I am a senior from this school. I am writing for the purpose of providing several suggestions on how to improve students' physical condition. Compared with the past, lots of students are losing their advantage of healthy body quality, since they spend most of their time on surfing online and keep inside. Thus, it is necessary for school to take some measures which can enhance their body condition. Firstly, more activities about sports can be held to arouse their enthusiasm of body building. In addition, it is advisable to update the physical exercise equipments which will enable students go outside to sport more conveniently. I sincerely hope you adopting my advice. Students, with you help, will have more chances to improve their body condition. Yours truly, Li Lei

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A new homework, please help me correct it!

Dear President,
I am a senior from this school. I am writing for the purpose of providing several suggestions on how to improve students' physical condition.
Compared with the past, lots of students are losing their advantage of healthy bodies, since they spend most of their time indoors and online. Thus, it is necessary for school to take some measures which can enhance their physical condition. First, more activities about sports can be held to arouse their enthusiasm for body building. In addition, it is advisable to update the physical exercise equipment which will enable students go outside to do sports more conveniently.
I sincerely hope you will adopt my advice. Students, with your help, will have more chances to improve their physical condition.

Yours truly,
Li Lei

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