With forgetting the star that we have cried out *This sentence is being continued from It wakes the town up again, so whole sentence is It wakes the town up again with forgetting the star that we have cried out. Remember whole the meaning of the verse 2, Watching a star dying when people cry. The star might have been fighting with the cause of death until he/she dies. One day a new star comes out. It wakes the town up again. Let me explain this part of lyric with example episode. Today, Johnny Depp dies by cancer. I am watching it on TV or something and people cry (Watching the star's flame goes out when the town wiped all the rain). I think that Johnny Depp might have struggled to live and been fighting with the cancer until he dies (It might have been fighting with itself till the end). One day, Henry Cavill comes out (One day, a new star comes out). Many people will say that "he is a so great", He is the one of the greatest actors. So, he cheers people up (It wakes the town up again). People will forget the sadness of death of Johnny Depp because people focus on Henry (With forgetting the star that we have cried out).

I hope my explanations help for your advice.

It might have been fighting with itself till the end *Remember the phrase of watching the star's flame goes out (the star burning out), I feel the star might have been fighting with the cause of death to live until he/she, or star in the sky dies. The meaning of the cause of death is I already explained with examples

Toward where the lights shine *I'll change it to "the light's shining".

Watching the star's flame go out *I'll change it to "goes" or replace it to "Watching the star burning out". The reason why I want to write "Watching the star burning out" is I think that the phrase expresses the fate of the star including both two meanings of stars. For example, when two stars in the space collide each other, one goes away but, another one goes into the earth's atmosphere and it will burn out = the star dies. It reflects to people's life. In our case, a famous person gets a cancer, heart attack, or, grievous injury by traffic accident and he/she dies. In addition, I feel that the phrase "the star's flame goes out" is so clear and easy to understand. But, I feel that he/she dies in a moment like blowing out a flame. While I feel that the phrase "burning out" is taking time until coming of the time to die. Actually, I am not sure which phrase is better to this lyric, so please tell me which is good.

When the town wiped all the rain *This sentence means when people cry. The reason why people cry is that the star burning out (the star dies). So, the sentence will be "Watching the star's flame goes out (the star burning out), when the town wiped all the rain.

Thank you for fixing my lyric. I'll explain more about this lyric. At first glance, this lyric is about "stars in the sky" but, it is about "famous people called star" and the message of this lyric is I want to be the one of the famous people.

When the town goes to sleep *I already changed this sentence to "When the town is in a dream" and the meaning of sentence is when people are in a dream=sleeping in the night.

I remember hoping to shine like them in the sky *I'll change "in" to "on".

Every time I step up the stairs, I have stumbled and fallen *This sentence means that in my life, every time I solve a problem and go to the next, I have faced other problem and stumbled and fallen.=It is about try and error.

In that way, I have grown up to rise up high *In that way= repeating try and error and solving the problem, so the sentence means I have grown up to rise up higher (to be more famous like "stars") with repeating try and error and solving the problem.

I am taking off with my hope to a world I haven't seen *Maybe this sentence depends on individual feeling. I feel taking off is that going to somewhere  by airplane while setting out is that going to somewhere by walking. This sentence means I am starting to go to my path to see a world I haven't seen. So, I am not sure which is better between setting out or taking off.