Please help me out to write a lyric Hello guys. I am trying to write a lyric in English but, I might have some grammar errors and I am not sure if native English speakers get the meanings. Please let me know the errors or something difficult to understand. Before you fix my sentences, I let you know the meaning of this lyric. This lyric is expressing two meanings of stars. The one is "stars in the sky" and another one is "famous people called stars". Verse 1: When the town is in asleep, Watch’n billions of stars I remember hoping for shine-out like them to the sky Every time I step up the stairs, I have stumbled and stopped Having grown up to be the one in that way Chorus: I am taking off with my hope To the world I haven’t seen. I am taking off with my all Toward where the light shines on Verse 2: When the town is in the rain Watch’n the star burning out It might have been fighting with itself till the end One day, new star’s out It wakes the town up again With forgetting the one we have cried it out