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hola, me llamo claire y estoy aquí para practicar español. send me a message if you would like to practice. :) i’m especially interested in exercise, horses, and politics.
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    Back to English

    I've been focused on Spanish for the <s>lastest</s> last eight months, since I started <s>to live</s> living in Argentina. I was so engaged in improving my Argentinian accent and vocabulary and putting all my energy in new projects that I missed <s>to practice</s> practicing English (or you could say "I didn't practice English). I felt like I didn't need it anymore. But learning English is a good tool for many reasons. In my case, I want to explore the world <s>connecting</s> and connect with native people. Knowing English, it's possible to connect with almost everyone in the planet currently (it's more natural to say "it's currently possible.."). At same time, teaching my language and expanding my dialect around the globe is also possible using first my knowledge in English.

    I would appreciate if you could please check my text. I want to express <s>me</s> myself as natural as possible. Thank you!

    Good work.
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    October 20, 2019
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    History about Leigh, she is an actress

    A beautiful woman lives with your boyfriend in an apartment near her office and she does sports every morning before she goes to work. After that she makes breakfast with some butter, a piece of bread, some fruits and a cup of <s>cafe</s> coffee. Her name is Leigh. Today she has a day off and she <s>will</s> plans to <s>that she</s> buy a ticket to London. Her profession is <s>actress</s> acting. In the afternoon she is going to the Airport <s>and</s> to buy <s>for</s> a direct <s>fly</s> flight to London. She asks for an one way ticket because she doesn't know when she will come<s>s</s> back. She is wearing a black jupe (skirt??) and shoes with a blue T-Shirt. Her hair<s>e are</s> is long and brown. She is very busy in her business but she has a boyfriend that she loves and he <s>makes surprise</s> surprises her when <s>she</s> he comes back <s>at</s> home with a cake and <s>cafe</s> coffee because <s>she has</s> it is her birthday.
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    October 20, 2019
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    Fall in Saint-Petersburg

    It's hard to write something essential and interesting when you just follow your desire to be consistent. I<s>'m</s> used to write a couple of notebook entries daily, but (now?) sometimes my head is empty and my work completely absorbs me (not sure I can use it in this context). (this expression sounds good and natural)

    Meanwhile, fall has come, political news <s>have</s> has become worse and I feel sick and depressed. I'd love to be by the sea side - of course not by the Baltic sea, but by the warm one. When you live in Saint-Petersburg for a long time you understand that <s>is</s> it was built for reach people who could afford to spend half a year somewhere in the city of Nice (I have not heard/am unfamiliar with the expression "city of nice") and didn't care about the local climate. Also I believe that earlier winters were much more frosty and snowy, although definitely the Baltic Gulf made the climate humid even then.

    So, it's not very pleasant to stay here during the fall and winter seasons. However, we live here. At least it's worth mentioning, that this city is the most beautiful city in the world, and fall just makes it obvious. Come, see its parks and channels right now! You'll probably agree with me.

    Nice work
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    October 12, 2019
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    The Freedom

    Yes, it’s only about 9 pm but already I feel sleepy and may just fall asleep <s>anytime soon</s> at any moment. This kind of freedom so easily found in my life isn’t equally enjoyed by many of my colleagues with kids who would also love to be able do so. For them, living with a lack of sleep is “the norm” <s>of life</s>. <em>Me, on the contrary,</em> (this is clear but awkward) although I do have to deal with my loneliness problem when staying at home alone, which isn’t actually too much a problem for me, and the problem of maybe being alone when I’m old, I have always had this freedom to sleep whenever I want after work. If you <s>know</s> knew me more, you would know that I like to sleep a lot. To live in a constant state of inadequate sleep would certainly drive me crazy! There are pros and cons of this kind of life<s> I choose I believe</s> but as I said <em>earlier</em> <em>yesterday</em> (much more natural to choose "earlier" OR "yesterday") we have to know who we are first to decide what we should be after. I know myself pretty well. A busy life with not much choice in freedom of time or money is the last thing I would want for myself. So, I’m pretty happy and grateful for the life I have now.

    Nice work!
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    September 12, 2019
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    Our Hearts Know Better

    When we aren’t sure what we like or want, we can always find the right answers by observing what we do closely. They are often very accurate indications which can tell us what our hearts are really after. Take me for example. Many of you probably already know that I really like exercising and writing. I don’t make a living out of them but I <em>often</em> find myself doing these activities <em>whenever I can</em><em style="color: rgb(107, 36, 178);"> (saying both is redundant)</em>. Like whenever I get time, I just can’t help starting to write. Sometimes, I even write in the middle of the night when everyone’s asleep. I don’t get paid or anything but it’s just my way of winding down. I feel joy when doing it. Also, even when I was traveling in Europe not long ago, I kept thinking about dancing and swimming throughout my journey. Besides my examples, there are also cases like if you often want to talk to or check out the updates of someone, it could mean that you really like that person a lot. This sort of liking can be anything from a simple friendship to a crush or even love. But anyhow, I believe our hearts already know very clearly as to what or who we truly like. Next time when you’re baffled, why don’t you stop to take a look at what you have been doing!

    Very good!!
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    September 12, 2019
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    Several Sentences with New Words

    1) When we were at school\schoolboys some of my peers despised the Belorussian language . Today I can't believe that we were so oppressed by Soviet dictatorship that our own language seemed <s>to us</s> so unattractive to us. You're not incorrect, but this way sounds more natural/fluid.
    2) For Russians, living life in congruence with reality has always been difficult. As one of the famous Russian writers said, we always try to set powerful goals without even a bit of common sense.
    3) Scarcity of their means didn't allow them to achieve what they wanted, but also pushed them to appeal for <s>a</s> governmental support. Next year the archaeological search will be expanded\spread out <s>for\on</s> to the whole territory of the ancient valley.
    4) Deforestation is a modern issue that should be discussed on the international level. Economic growth or decline may not define <s>how</s> what our planet should look like. "what our planet should look like" or, "how our planet should look."
    5) We launch\kick off our new program intended for those who simply don't have the time or chance to come here and would like to participate remotely. The Internet technologies will help us involve in the program many people who otherwise mightn't have had the opportunity to be with us. It is geared first towards those who live far from the capital and we're thrilled to announce this. Here "the time" and "time" work equally well, but it would have to be "the chance," so for time and chance, it has to be "the time or chance."
    6) First of all, you have to speak with people who know the ropes. Don't be silly! You don't have any leverage and you can make the situation even worse\you can worsen the situation.
    7) That<s>'s</s> was? a really interesting point in his interview, but I can't agree with him on many other issues. I guess he hasn't pondered all this thoroughly\he hasn't thought it over thoroughly. this is a little awkward but I think it is because it is a fragment without context, not because you made language mistakes.

    Nice work!
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    September 12, 2019
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    Several Sentences with New Words

    1) You'll get to know him better if you come and have some drinks with us. We can also treat you to dinner.
    2) They fought over a girl, but she simply preferred another guy to them. That was funny.
    3) Nobody could see me off, so I was forced to look for the route to the local airport which is located quite far from the city.
    4) She was so kind and attentive to me that she left her papers and saw me out.
    5) Contenders should apply for grants <s>not</s> no later than the 31st of July. (or "no later than July 31st") Meeting this/the deadline is a must.
    6) I did away with smoking around ten years ago and since then I've been feeling happy.
    7) He wantonly sits at the computer night and day doing nothing besides playing games.

    Nice work :)
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    September 12, 2019
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    You will love this story,

    One day, an old man and his wife were preparing <s>themselves</s> to go straight to work. They went out of their house and found their car had been stolen and the senior man called the police to <s>fast-track the reporting</s> report the theft. When they went back home they found their car had been parked in the same place with a note <s>beyond</s> on the windshield <s>wipers</s> that <s>says</s> said "my wife went to labour, and this is the first baby we've had <s>have</s> since we got married from 10 years ago, I beg your pardon, and please accept my gift to you to go out for a marvelous dinner by the beach" Immediately, their eyes became blurred by tears <s>crying</s>

    They went in the next day out for that unique dinner they deserved,
    But the shock was when they came back home, they found that their house had been burgled, anything precious had been stolen and they recognized immediately who was the thief by a written note on the kitchen's door <s>says</s> that said "hope you enjoyed the dinner."
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    September 12, 2019
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    Note#1

    Hello! It's my first note on Italki. Please, <s>write</s> tell me where I <s>do</s> make mistakes.

    Note#1 About myself.
    My name is Olga and I'm from Russia. I live in a small town in the centre part of Siberia. I have elder brother and sister and a lot of cousins but they live apart ("they live far away" or "they all live far apart"). I'm unemployed at this moment and I want to find <s>the</s> work. <em>I well at now though. Besides, I learn something for my education. </em>(I do not understand)
    What about my hobbies. I like folk and folk-rock music or something <s>like</s> similar. I like to read fantasy books and books about foreign languages or different countries. I want to read books in English, among other languages, in the future.
    In my free time I'm writing this text and trying to improve <s>it </s>my english <s>for example</s>. Also I like walking <s>among</s> along the streets and sometimes I sew various trinkets.

    good job :)
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    September 12, 2019
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    My Dolls

    They have mouths but cannot talk. Their expressions are always the same. When I go back home every day, they beam at me all the time. They always have my back and never betray me. They go with me to anywhere in the world and give me all the comfort that I need. They are my <s>families</s> family. Who are these special guests I’m talking about? They are my dolls.
    Mom often tells me that it’s no good for me to have all these dolls and keep talking to them. She detests them, for they always have the same expressions, which in a way (no comma) look like some kind of clowns to her, and are lifeless objects. <em>Never a day in her life*</em><em style="color: rgb(0, 71, 178);">*</em> does Mom realize how important these dolls are to me! They are my family and nothing will ever change my feelings toward them. When I was traveling alone in 7 different countries far away from home, it was these dolls that <s>had</s> kept me company. When I’m too tired to even talk after work, it is also these dolls that give me a never-changing hug and kiss. They travel, sleep and live with me. Some people may consider it silly to feel this way about some lifeless dolls but what truly matters to me is how I feel about them rather than how <em>they</em> (more clear to say "those people") feel about us.

    **This is technically correct and it is clear what you mean, but it sounds a little bit unnatural. If you want to say this phrase and have it sound more natural it is usually used to talk about the past. Example: "she never worked a day in her life."

    Very nice work!!
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    September 12, 2019
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