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Giselle
The Freedom Yes, it’s only about 9 pm but already I feel sleepy and may just fall asleep anytime soon. This kind of freedom so easily found in my life isn’t equally enjoyed by many of my colleagues with kids who would also love to do so. For them, living with a lack of sleep is “the norm” of life. Me, on the contrary, although have to deal with my loneliness problem when staying at home alone, which isn’t actually too much a problem for me, and the problem of maybe being alone when I’m old, have always had this freedom to sleep whenever I want after work. If you know me more, you would know that I like to sleep a lot. To live in a constant state of inadequate sleep would certainly drive me crazy! There are pros and cons of this kind of life I choose I believe but as I said earlier yesterday we have to know who we are first to decide what we should be after. I know myself pretty well. A busy life with not much choice in freedom of time or money is the last thing I would want for myself. So, I’m pretty happy and grateful for the life I have now.

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The Freedom

Yes, it’s only about 9 pm but already I feel sleepy and may just fall asleep anytime soon at any moment. This kind of freedom so easily found in my life isn’t equally enjoyed by many of my colleagues with kids who would also love to be able do so. For them, living with a lack of sleep is “the norm” of life. Me, on the contrary, (this is clear but awkward) although I do have to deal with my loneliness problem when staying at home alone, which isn’t actually too much a problem for me, and the problem of maybe being alone when I’m old, I have always had this freedom to sleep whenever I want after work. If you know knew me more, you would know that I like to sleep a lot. To live in a constant state of inadequate sleep would certainly drive me crazy! There are pros and cons of this kind of life I choose I believe but as I said earlier yesterday (much more natural to choose "earlier" OR "yesterday") we have to know who we are first to decide what we should be after. I know myself pretty well. A busy life with not much choice in freedom of time or money is the last thing I would want for myself. So, I’m pretty happy and grateful for the life I have now.

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