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  • Corrected

    A little about me

    Hi, Everybody! My name is Vanessa and I am from Brazil.

    Here in Brazil, I am Pharmacist and I work with medical devices.
    This is a kind of job with many challenges, because work with health is not easy, but very gratify.
    One of the all challenges is the English, because many of the products come from import and we have to regularize in Brazil.

    About myself, I like to go to the movies, read many books, watch soap operas and anime (Japanese animation) . I like to travel a lot and go out with my friends.

    The yellow text is for something is a little wrong, just wrong capitalization or not the right wording. "Hi, everybody!"... "I'm a pharmacist"..."it's not easy, but very gratifying", however switch it out with "satisfying" because it's a better word for this. Also, "come from import" try to say "they are imported". Other than that. very easy to read and gets the point across so good work!

    The red text is for words that don't need to be there so go ahead and try to read it without them. 

    The pink text are for words that are misspelled, however it was still understandable. So it's still a good job

    Eu falo português é que você precisa que eu explique. 


     

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    January 5, 2018
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    I'm busy too.

    I'm busy. I'm washing my windows and of course I'm watching for all my neighbors.
    Mrs Anderson is cleaning her kitchen. Mr.Wilson is doing his exercises.
    Tommy Lee is feeding his dog. And Mr. and Mrs. Lane are looking for the car key.
    I am seeing all and everybody. Who is standing at the door.
    How many people are working at the office today.
    What time James is haveing his piano lesson today.
    Which direction Tom and Ken are driving.
    What place Teddy and Billy are playing soccer.
    Which TV program the Simpson's are watching.
    Everybody at my street is very busy today.

    For the first highlighted text, the word "and" should never start the sentence, so instead it would be "Tommy Lee is feeding his dog; and Mr. and Mrs. Lane are looking for the car keys.  The sentence can be combined with a semicolon. 

    As the for "haveing" is incorrect. When using "ing" at the end of the word, you should remove the "e". There are a few exception, but in this case it would be "having"

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    January 5, 2018
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  • Answered
    Both are about something temporary. "Borrow" meaning something you're getting temporary period. "Lend" meaning something you're giving for a temporary period. "Hey, can I borrow a pencil?" "Yeah, I think I have one to lend to you."
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    December 9, 2017
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    It seems pretty natural to me, if you want to make it more casual you can say "looks" instead of "outward appearance".
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    December 7, 2017
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    Grieve is what you feel inside, it's your sadness. Mourning is what you do on the outside, like some cultures wear black to funerals to show their sadness
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    December 7, 2017
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