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    The fake social media!

    In  On my last trip to Istanbul I did a little experiment (or you can also say : I decided to take a little experiment) .. Unusually I shared on Instagram many pictures of the places  that I visited in Istanbul  to measure how the  do people get effected by the photos and places that we shared on social media..
    When I returned to dormitory I was surprised by my friend's reaction about the amazing trip that I have done  took...  knowing that it was a very normal trip..
    So I deduce  decided  that social media gives us a fake imagine image about people's lives. It can give us the wrong idea about how people live and what they do.That's why we should't always trust what we see on Instagram .

     (the fact that make us don't trust it to take an idea about one person or company or anything else..- here I got the point,but I will have to change this sentence so that it can make more sense )

    And it's still my opinion..

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    February 9, 2018
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    Recently,it's been getting colder every day in Japan.In the town I live in it has already snowed several times this year. The temperature in the morning and in the evening is almost-4-5 degrees which makes it so cold in my apartment when I get back from my office  as well.

    *sorry I cut out the part ''in my room at the inexpensive rental apartment '' because it didn't make much sense for me..

     However, there are some meals I am excited to eat in the winter season/time. It's what we call Nabe Ryouri. It is typical traditional Japanese hodgepodge suitable for the cold weather. Nabe tastes great at this time of the year. There are several kinds of Nabe in Japan and they are local specialties. I have a passion for Nabe with Miso soup.

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    January 27, 2018
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    Day 25: A few minutes ago I just finished the first Day of Astronomy.

    Today was the Day of Astronomy,the night began   in the Central park.I live in a small town and a telescope helped me to attract people's attention,some of them wanted to see the moon through the telescope and others were just curious to see how I use it.

    There was and emotional moment when a child *get his cocked (the identification that you used in to the event)  - I don't understand what you meant to say here

    and I felt that he was really excited to participate in the activities. 

    When we arrived at school, I did/held a short presentation about the Orion's Belt constellation and after we  went to   see the sky. I think that everyone  enjoyed it and learned something new.

    Many people asked me when there will be the next day of astronomy. I think it should be on the 31. because there will be a full moon.

    I want to share this with you.

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    January 26, 2018
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    So far I traveled through more than 10 countries.

    One of my most memorable countries is Taiwan,people and food are amazing there.

    *I would use the word amazing instead awesome,it is more suitable in this context.

    you can also say :My most memorable country is Taiwan because of it's amazing people and food.

    One of the most beautiful parts of this trip was that I could taste some exotic food.

    My Taiwanese friend highly recommended me to try the ''stinky tofu" ,so I tasted it at the night market.

    It actually seemed very popular in Taiwan because I had to wait in line for many hours to get buy one.

    Even though it smelled awful it tasted good to me.

    *or : It tasted good to me,even though it smelled awful.

    My friend said nattos smelled worse than stinky tofu,but I thought they didn't smell so bad.
    According to my friend, stinky tofu has an acquired taste that you grow fond of over time.
    Therefore, I would try it again on my next trip to Taiwan.

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    January 25, 2018
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    MY routine 

    I wake up at 5:35 an get up to pee.

    Then I must go out to preach,because I am a JW. 

    My English learning is a bit slow, because I have so many plans.

     or you can say: My English learning is a bit slower lately ,because I have many things going on. 

     Maybe I forget that I only have two hands - two short hands. I can't hug the world !

    or you can say: Sometimes I forget that I only have two hands that are too short to hug the world !

    Actually,the specialists say that it is the right way to fail. I'm glad to have noticed what my brain tends to do. 

    Now I can keep the focus on my English learning and after that I can take on some other languages.

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    January 25, 2018
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    Writing everyday was a good experience and I don't believe that it is difficult to think of a topic to write about.

    * I'm going to plane read a short story and try to share it on my words      * I'm not sure what you meant by ''I'm going to plane.." is it that you are going somewhere and you will read a short story  on a plane ,or you meant to say that you plan to read a short story and than write about it?

    I plan to read a short story and then try to share it using my own words or I write about a movie I recommend for the readers. 

    * because the routing don't give me many stories by use new words or add structures and expressions unconventionals.  

    *Here I have a hard time to understand what you wanted to say..If you want you can try to explain me the meaning in a simple way so I can correct it


    I'm going to step out of my comfort zone.

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    January 25, 2018
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    January 25, 2018
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    In her spare time she likes to travel around and she would love to take her student traveling. you can also say: ...she would love to take her student to travel with her.
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    January 24, 2018
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    Not a "hand made worker" ,but craftsman,artisan or even artist is all correct. And everyone will understand that it is something hand made :)
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    January 24, 2018
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    It's been week  since I left Banff and started a new life in a new place.

    I didn't have time to say thank you and goodbye to some of my friends in person, so I will do it here instead.

    I am thankful to everyone that I've met in Banff. I was blessed to have spent time with these crazy, lovely people over there.

    You guys made my Canada life!

    (you can also say : You guys were the best part of my Canada trip)

    Thank you so much and see you next time in Banff!!




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    January 24, 2018
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