The fake social media!
In my last trip to Istanbul I did a little experiment.. unusually I shared a lot of places that I visited in Istanbul on Instagram to measure how the people effect by the photo and places that we shared on social media..
When I returned to dormitory I was surprised by my friend reaction about my amazing trip that I have done.. knowing that it was a very normal trip..
So I deduce that that social media gives us a fake imagine about the fact that make us don't trust it to take an idea about one person or company or anything else..
And it's still my opinion..
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The fake social media!
On my last trip to Istanbul I did a little experiment.. unusually I share* a lot of places that I visit* in Istanbul on Instagram to guage how people are affected by the photo and places there..When I returned to dormitory I was surprised by my friend's reaction about the amazing trip that I had taken, knowing that it was a very normal trip,
so I deduced that social media gives us a fake image about the facts, and that we should be less trusting of it. And that is still my opinion.
*when describing something that you usually do or a habit, it is usual to write in the present tense.
I had much trouble understanding your last paragraph so, regrettably, I guessed your meaning.
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The fake social media!
In On my last trip to Istanbul I did a little experiment (or you can also say : I decided to take a little experiment) .. Unusually I shared on Instagram many pictures of the places that I visited in Istanbul to measure how the do people get effected by the photos and places that we shared on social media..When I returned to dormitory I was surprised by my friend's reaction about the amazing trip that I have done took... knowing that it was a very normal trip..
So I deduce decided that social media gives us a fake imagine image about people's lives. It can give us the wrong idea about how people live and what they do.That's why we should't always trust what we see on Instagram .
(the fact that make us don't trust it to take an idea about one person or company or anything else..- here I got the point,but I will have to change this sentence so that it can make more sense )
And it's still my opinion..
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