Wanted a A2-B1 student

check plz It is an ordinary summer day. In the background I see green trees and bushes surrounding a grassy field with flowers. Shadows and sun rays are playing in the leaves and branches. In the foreground I see a field with fresh grass and flowers.On the left there is a girls and on the right there is a boy. It seems like they are friends.The girl is sitting with her knees bent and one hand leaning on the ground. She is stretching to the boy showing him a flower. Her pose tells us that she wants him to smell it. She has got shoulder-lenght dark brown hair and a fringe. She looks happy and calm. The boy is also sitting on the grass with his legs lying flat and his hand leaning on the ground. He is holding a flower in the other hand. It seems like he has leant back because of the girl and he is shy a bit, but he is smiling. I think they are not playing, they are posing as they are sitting with their legs parallel but not opposite each other.

correct plz Good night, everyone. Correct me if I'm wrong. shortly about the weather. I'm walking around the puddle because the puddle is too deep and too big. I'm jumping and skipping over the puddle because it is deep, but not big. I'm tiptoeing across the puddle because the puddle is not deep, but big.