correct plz
Good night, everyone. Correct me if I'm wrong.
shortly about the weather. I'm walking around the puddle because the puddle is too deep and too big. I'm jumping and skipping over the puddle because it is deep, but not big. I'm tiptoeing across the puddle because the puddle is not deep, but big.
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correct plz
Good night, everyone. Correct me if I'm wrong.shortly about the weather. I'm walking around the puddle because the puddle is too deep and too big. I'm jumping and skipping over the puddle because it is deep, but not big. I'm tiptoeing across the puddle because the puddle is not deep, but big.
No need to use those commas
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It all sounds fine to me, except that I would probably just say "jumping" instead of "jumping and skipping." "Jumping" implies that you are clearing the puddle in one jump. "Jumping and skipping" makes it sounds like you are splashing through the puddle, so it's a little confusing.
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))) thanks a lot. Now 'skipping' sounds funny
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