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- an ielts eassy,please help me! Some people think it is beneficial for kids to study a second language when in primary school.I do support the idea,although there are some disadvantages. According to a scientific research,people’s thinking are more active when they are young especially in elementary school,which reflects that primary students are more easy to understand and accept new knowledge.That’s to say children would be less toilsome to be taught step by step from an early age.Besides,the competition among among teenagers are increasingly severe,while learning a foreign language as early as possible may give kids more possibilities to stand out among their contemporaries.Take me as an example,I learned English from grade three and when I entered middle school,I was more excellent in English learning than any other classmate of mine,so I was chosen to make a speech in English in front of the whole school. On the contrary,I can not deny there are also some disadvantages.Firstly,Children would lose their leisure time if they were asked to study English when they should have been playing with friends happily and blissfully.When I was young,I always admire those who are free to play in the yard at the moment when I had to stay at home and repeat the boring words once and once again.These really exerted a lot of pressure on my emaciate shoulders.And,the overmuch time spent on English may affect student’s other subjects,like Chinese and math,which should be laid a good foundation at primary school. Above all,although there are some disadvantages of learning a foreign language at elementary school,the advantages are outweigh then in the long term.
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1 (要使用词"脾气") 她是<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>良</strike> 很</font>好的人,但<font style="background-color: yellow;">她</font>有一个缺<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>少</strike></font>点<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">。</font></strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">:</font>有时她<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">很急</font></strike>脾气很躁。
2 (要使用词"吵架") 她今天跟她的男朋友在餐厅吵架了。
3 (要使用词"惭愧") <font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>所以</strike></font>她正<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">在</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">为自</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">己</font></strike>感到惭愧。
4 (要使用词"坚持") 她知道<strike>她</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">自己</font><strike>是不正确的</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">错了</font>,但<font style="background-color: yellow;">还</font>继续坚持。
5 <font style="background-color: yellow;">她</font>上<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">一</font></strike>次<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">她</font></strike>已经答应<strike>举止</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">会安 静点</font>,<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">结果</font></strike>今天又没忍住。
6 她明白她<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">要会变好的</font></strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">会变得更好</font>。
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1今天是星期一。每个月<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font>父母<font style="background-color: yellow;">都会</font>从儿子<font style="background-color: yellow;">那</font>收到一个包裹。
2他是外国留学生。他<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">已经一年</font></strike>在大学学习医学<font style="background-color: yellow;">已经一年</font>了。
3 他<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">在包裹里</font></strike>寄出了<font style="background-color: yellow;">包裹</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">,里面装着</font>纪念品和明信片。他每次<font style="background-color: yellow;">都</font>写信。
4他来信说<font style="background-color: yellow;">他</font>想念极了。
5妈妈总是<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>急不可耐</strike>迫不及待</font>地等<strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">待</font></strike>这些信,<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>之后一次有</strike>然后一次又一次</font>读<font style="background-color: yellow;">着</font>它们。0 votedNovember 12, 20170“我的朋友工作” 请你看一下我写的句子?
我有一个朋友,他在有名的公司工作。这个公司规定<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>,</strike>:</font>上班不可迟到。他的办公室真<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">的</font></strike>舒服。他要努力干活,按时<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">做事</font></strike>完成任务。他做的事情<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">又</font></strike>麻烦<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>又</strike>而</font>重要。不管压力<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>很</strike>多</font>大,<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">但是</font></strike>他<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">都</font>继续努力工作。他顺利<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">地</font></strike>完成工作<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">、</font>解决关键问题<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>,</strike>、</font>调查材料<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>,</strike>、</font>打详细<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">的</font></strike>报告等等。<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>他最近总结了全部情况,得到了成功。</strike></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">他所在的行业,</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">工作竞争激烈</font><strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">竞争很大</font></strike>,但<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">是</font></strike>他<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>继续</strike></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">依旧</font>努力工作<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">。</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">
</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">修改原因:</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">1.标点符号使用错误</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">2.句子不够简洁。有些“的、地”可以删掉</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">3.关联词使用错误</font>
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</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">应注意的短语: 工作竞争激烈</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"></font>
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</font>0 votedOctober 29, 20170- Please help! We live in a world where communication through state-of-the-art technology such as smart phone and computer is here to stay. Some people consider those wall-to-wall tools can harm our ability to communicate with people face to face. I concur with this opinion. I do believe phones and computers not only rob man of much time and room for face to face, but also reduce the level of people’s interpersonal communication skills. The modern communication tools are going to make massive inroads into daily life, directly reducing people’s time and opportunity for face to face. A most popular YouTube video—“I Forgot My Phone” is a case in point. The two-minute video begins with a couple in bed. The woman stares silently while her boyfriend pays no mind and checks his smartphone. The subsequent scenes follow women through a day that is downright dystopian: people ignore her as they stare at their phones during lunch, at a concert, while bowling and even at her birthday party. The clip ends with women back in bed with her boyfriend at the end of the day; he is still using his phone. It needles people about addiction to that little screen and suggests how a modern electronic gizmo nibbles away at people’s face-to-face time and chances. Smartphone and computer-obsessed culture also kill man’s skills on reading non-verbal communication. According to psychologist, 90% of communication between people is non-verbal. Such as the expression on face, bodily gestures or tone of voice, to name but a few, can all show one’s feelings or thoughts to the other. However, if someone, day and night, is glued to the screen of mobile phone for chatting and tweeting and, all the time, is married to virtual worlds of computer for gaming and socializing, he will hard to catch the subtle tone in employers voice, see parents’ expression as it changes from sad to outraged, and look partners in the eye to see if they are trustworthy. In fact, people heavily relying on screens and losing non-verbal communication could give rise to suspicions, misunderstanding, even divisions. In conclusion, I am convinced that technology, especially computers and phones, is a good servant but a bad master for communication. If people were continued to stare at screens, they would have lost true face to face and even more than now.October 29, 201720
- ielts task2.Is there any error in this article? We live in a world where smart phones and computers are here to stay. While new technology makes it easier for us to keep in touch with people from far and wide, it also risks weakening our ability to communicate effectively. The proliferation of smart gadgets could in many ways hinder face-to-face communication skills. Start with non-verbal one. According to psychologists, 90% of communication between people is non-verbal, i.e. facial expressions and body language. It reveals one’s true feelings and thoughts that are hard to convey through texting or sending voice messages. As people grow accustomed or even get addicted to using electronic devices to stay connected, they may shy away from social occasions where a certain degree of interaction is required, such as family meals and team sports. Therefore, they would not be able to develop the ability to read between the lines, and this could make them feel socially awkward and place them at a disadvantage in important events such as job interviews and business negotiations. Moreover, phones and computers may change people’s conversational behaviour for the worse. Heavy users of such electronics often have a short attention span and are more likely to jump from topic to topic when an idea springs to mind. As a consequence, they may become unfocused and sidetracked during offline conversations. Internet slang also does its bit. Today, youngsters who text with abbreviated forms of words tend to speak with the same acronyms and use internet catchphrases heavily. These forms of talking are often construed as flighty and uneducated, from which misunderstandings ensue. In conclusion, I am convinced that smart phones and computers do more harm than good when it comes to cultivating interpersonal skills. For those who are married to the wizardry of electronic world, turning off their digital gadgets may be the first step in becoming an effective communicator.October 29, 201720
