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Please help! We live in a world where communication through state-of-the-art technology such as smart phone and computer is here to stay.  Some people consider those wall-to-wall tools can harm our ability to communicate with people face to face. I concur with this opinion. I do believe phones and computers not only rob man of much time and room for face to face, but also reduce the level of people’s interpersonal communication skills.  The modern communication tools are going to make massive inroads into daily life, directly reducing people’s time and opportunity for face to face.  A most popular YouTube video—“I Forgot My Phone” is a case in point. The two-minute video begins with a couple in bed. The woman stares silently while her boyfriend pays no mind and checks his smartphone.  The subsequent scenes follow women through a day that is downright dystopian: people ignore her as they stare at their phones during lunch, at a concert, while bowling and even at her birthday party.  The clip ends with women back in bed with her boyfriend at the end of the day; he is still using his phone. It needles people about addiction to that little screen and suggests how a modern electronic gizmo nibbles away at people’s face-to-face time and chances. Smartphone and computer-obsessed culture also kill man’s skills on reading non-verbal communication. According to psychologist, 90% of communication between people is non-verbal. Such as the expression on face, bodily gestures or tone of voice, to name but a few, can all show one’s feelings or thoughts to the other.  However, if someone, day and night, is glued to the screen of mobile phone for chatting and tweeting and, all the time, is married to virtual worlds of computer for gaming and socializing, he will hard to catch the subtle tone in employers voice, see parents’ expression as it changes from sad to outraged, and look partners in the eye to see if they are trustworthy.  In fact, people heavily relying on screens and losing non-verbal communication could give rise to suspicions, misunderstanding, even divisions. In conclusion, I am convinced that technology, especially computers and phones, is a good servant but a bad master for communication. If people were continued to stare at screens, they would have lost true face to face and even more than now.

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Please help!

We live in a world where communication through state-of-the-art technology such as smart phones and computers and they are here to stay. 

Some people consider those wall-to-wall tools can harmful to our ability to communicate with people face to face. I concur with this opinion.

I do believe phones and computers not only rob man of much time and room for face to face communication, but also reduces the level of people’s interpersonal communication skills. 

The Modern communication tools are going to make massive inroads into daily life, directly reducing people’s time and opportunity for face to face communication. 

A most very popular YouTube video called “I Forgot My Phone” is a case in point. The two-minute video begins with a couple in bed. The woman stares silently while her boyfriend pays no mind attention and checks his smartphone. 

The subsequent scenes follow the woman through a day that is downright dystopian: people ignore her as they stare at their phones during lunch, at a concert, while bowling and even at her birthday party. 

The clip ends with the woman back in bed with her boyfriend at the end of the day; he is still using his phone. It needles people about addiction to that little screen and suggests how a modern electronic gizmo nibbles away at people’s face-to-face time and chances.

A smartphone and computer-obsessed culture also kills man’s skills at on reading non-verbal communication. According to psychologists, 90% of communication between people is non-verbal. Such as the expression on face, bodily gestures or tone of voice, to name but a few, can all show one’s feelings or thoughts to the other. 

However, if someone, day and night, is glued to the screen of a mobile phone for chatting and tweeting and, all the time, is married to virtual worlds of computers for gaming and socializing, he will have a hard time to catching the subtle tone in an employers voice, see his parents’ expression as it changes from sad to outraged, and look partners in the eye to see if they are trustworthy. 

In fact, people heavily relying on screens and losing non-verbal communication could give rise to suspicions, misunderstanding, or even divisions.

In conclusion, I am convinced that technology, especially computers and phones, is a good servant but a bad master for communication. If people were to continue to stare at screens, they would have lost true face to face communication or and even more than now.

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