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The bar chart compares the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age group in 1990 and 2010. It can be seen from the graph that in 1990 the <s>biggest </s>largest proportion of population making donations <s>was aged</s> were ages between 18 and 50. In particular, <s>people aged</s> ages between 36 and 50 accounted for slightly more than 40% of their age group. <em>(rephrase? I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.)</em> In 2010 the trend changed significantly. In fact, people <s>aged</s> age 51 and over donated more to charity than the other<s>s</s> groups. In particular, the percentages of the three younger age groups (18-25, 26-35, 36-50) sank by 10% on average. To conclude it can be stated that over 20 years the situation turned around completely.

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Forbidden Park -> Correct my grammar please

Jasper White is one of those strange beings that believes in ancient myths. Recently he bought a new house in the city, but since he moved there, he has been having problems with the motorists. When he comes back at night, he always discovers vehicles parked in front of his door.

For this reason, he couldn't put his car in the garage even one time. Jasper had put signs that said ''no parking'', but it didn't produce any results. Recently, he placed an ugly rock head over the gate.

It's one of the most ugly faces that I have ever seen. I asked what it means, and he answered that it's about ''jellyfish'', ''the gorgon''.

Jasper waits for her to change all the motorists into rock, but that doesn't happen to people nowadays.

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Some writing

Every single morning, I have to wake up early due to having a job located 50 miles away from my house.

I never have enough time to <s>having</s> have breakfast calmly. When <s>a</s> the clock <s>beats at</s> reads 6 am, I get in my car and kick off my journey.

I like <s>riding</s> driving on the highway instead of driving on the town's streets, despite <s>a</s> the chance of <s>having tightness</s> traffic on the road at this time. I'm listening to my favorite CD-disk with classical music while I'm driving <s>for not being</s> so I don't feel nervous.

I've been thinking about getting to work by train instead of the car. I would be able to listen to music wearing earphones and read a book at the same time.

My emotions about Kyrgyz traditions. Used to/to be used to/many/much

I have lived in Kyrgyzstan for 8 months. I lived in Russia before moving here. Kyrgyz people have their own interesting culture and traditions. I am getting used to Kyrgyz traditions, but it is difficult for me. I used to be angry about some things that I couldn't get used to. Kyrgyz food has too much meat and fat. I am used to eating it now. Kyrgyz culture is very kind. You can meet many people who would like to help you in different situations. In Russia I am not used to this.

Nice! Just changed some verbs to simple past tense.

Today

Today I woke up at 7:00 o'clock. After, I had breakfast and went to distance school. Distance school ended at 13:00 o'clock, and afterwards I had free time. At 16 o'clock I had an additional English lesson. During the lesson the teacher saw us to going to this site.

Fix it if something is wrong)