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The bar chart compares the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age group in 1990 and 2010. It can be seen from the graph that in 1990 the biggest proportion of population making donations was aged between 18 and 50. In particular, people aged between 36 and 50 accounted for slightly more than 40% of their age group. In 2010 the trend changed significantly. In fact, people aged 51 and over donated more to charity than the others groups. In particular, the percentages of the three younger age groups (18-25, 26-35, 36-50) sank by 10% on average. To conclude it can be stated that over 20 years the situation turned around completely.
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DESCRIBING GRAPHS 5, 120 WORDS
The bar chart compares the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age group in 1990 and 2010. It can be seen from the graph that in 1990 the biggest largest proportion of population making donations was aged were ages between 18 and 50. In particular, people aged ages between 36 and 50 accounted for slightly more than 40% of their age group. (rephrase? I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.) In 2010 the trend changed significantly. In fact, people aged age 51 and over donated more to charity than the others groups. In particular, the percentages of the three younger age groups (18-25, 26-35, 36-50) sank by 10% on average. To conclude it can be stated that over 20 years the situation turned around completely.
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