Please check grammatical mistakes of this short essay for me. Thank you in advance!!! Occasionally, when we get dissatisfied or just get bored with current reality about our society,we promptly tend to want go back to particular period of time where we allegedly had better structure of society than we have today.This feeling of nostalgia for the past period so-called "Golden Age" derived from psychological denial of the harsh present. Even you managed to go back in time you would find same picture as today, where every nations, species or ideas constantly struggle for survival and reproduction making sure their kind/type preserve longer than rival kind. As you can see, our history is predictable and boring to some extend, it just revolves around "Survival and Reproduction" therefore it's absurd to delude yourself into thinking that the past allegedly was better than the present same thing goes with the future. In conclusion we have try to get rid of this illusion and start dealing with the present if you are not satisfied with something about the present accept it, or accept the responsibility to change it, but avoid instinctive search for answers in past because you will fail to find one.

Can you check it please. What is the difference between these two? Are they same? She is gonna be big by then. vs She is gonna get big by then.

Can you check it please. What is the difference between these two? Honor got your father killed. Honor killed your father. What is the difference between these two? Can you guys explain it. Thank you guys. in advance :))

Can you guys check this sentence please She smells of vigour of youth.

请检查一下 这个句子 先谢谢 然后我可以为下一阶段的生活做准备。―― Then i can get prepared for the next stage of life.

请检查这篇短文 先谢谢您们了 我希望再次成为一个孩子。 我还是一个孩子的时候，我的生活像现在的这样不复杂。保持无知比知道太多更好。我没有根据人种，信仰或宗教来判断一个人。我被冰淇淋，巧克力和玩具入迷。一个冰淇淋会让我忘记整个世界，但今天，即使是吨和吨的冰淇淋不能给我幸福。 那时候，准备(ready to) 原谅任何人但今天，我不知道宽恕的意义。小时候不知道报仇，暴力和仇恨。对我来说，钱只是一种纸，但今天，我认为它比其他任何东西贵。那时候，我一点也不怕学习。这是生活不可缺少的一部分。但今天，我比获得知识和智慧更担心获得工作。 我从来没知道有那么多社会分裂，既然在学校我们都穿一样的制服。对我来说，那时候都是平等的。我跳舞在雨中，唱歌深情，高兴地哭了打心眼里笑了，那时候，我真的享受生活的每一个点。我希望能再次成为一个孩子。。。有纯真，安宁和幸福。

请检查这篇短文 先谢谢您们了 谁的影响更多，家人还是朋友？ 形成性格和世界观的时候年青人可以被许多方面影响。有的人认为对年青人家人有最重要的影响，其他人认为朋友们有最重要的影响。二者都基于各自的信仰。 的确，对年青人朋友们有更大的影响，因为是他们在相同的学校学习还有分享类似的经验。他们有许多共同之处还有内心深处的秘密从来不让父母知道。年轻人彼此容易交朋友和交流而不去理会(without bothering about) 所谓的代沟。一般，这个问题就是年青人和家人之间存在的问题。 不管怎么样，父母是孩子成长过程的第一位老师。父母教他们孩子怎么说第一个话在他们的生活，帮助他们走出第一步，见证他们的初恋，和孩子需要建议的给他们重要的建议。另一方面，孩子们跟随父母的榜样，还有面对做重要的决定的时候他们可以问父母意见，因为是他们有丰富的经验总是愿意分享。因此，父母见证大部分从孩子成长过程直到他们够成熟。结论，家人的影响对年青人比朋友的更重要。 虽然，年轻人跟同龄朋友的交往可能会收获很多，但对他们一生最重要的影响往往是他们的家庭。

请检查这此句子 先谢谢您们了 我一尝你的饭就知道是否好吃 如果不尝试你就不知道是否成功