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    So if your skin <strike>is</strike> easily <strike>to</strike> takes damage you´ll <strike>be</strike> easily <strike>to</strike> absorb rays from the sun  which<strike> is</strike> cause<strike>d by</strike> spots, <strike>and</strike> wrinkles, and sagging<strike></strike><strike></strike> <strike>and polluted air as well</strike>. So because your skin is dry <strike>that means</strike>, your skin <strike>would get</strike> <strike>old so fast</strike> will age faster. So it´s important to <strike>be</strike> always moisturize your skin.
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    <strike>And</strike> also, you´ll <strike>be</strike> have dry skin if you use oil cleansers because <strike>it</strike> they can <strike>be</strike> wash <strike>so well and also wash</strike> too much for dry skin.
    <strike>And</strike> if you wash with it, <strike>when you done it,</strike> using a towel <strike>and</strike> to dry your skin <strike>get dry</strike> can then cause your to skin react, <strike>that</strike> making your skin <strike>is</strike> dry<strike>ing now and it would try</strike> in attempt to protect from the damage of the outside <strike>so your skin become hard</strike>. If your skin <strike>get</strike> hardens what<strike>´s gonna</strike> will happen next is that <strike>not to </strike>lotions will not be able to penetrate <strike>any lotions</strike> because lotions can can only penetrate <strike>in</strike> soft skin. So now your skin is dry and lotions don´t penetrate into your skin, which <strike>and it</strike> means<strike>,</strike> it <strike>would </strike>will be more dry and <strike>what is gonna happen next is that</strike> your skin <strike>is getting not to</strike> won't be able to protect from the damage of the outside. There are a lot of things that can damage skin outside. for example, rays from the sun and PM2.5 which is polluted air from China, <strike>and</strike> friction,<strike>s</strike> <strike>and</strike> dust,<strike>s</strike> and so on.
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    Have you ever heard of how <strike>does</strike> dryness <strike>skin</strike> can affect your skin?
    Dry skin is caused by air and friction<strike>s</strike>.
    When the Autumn comes,the air <strike>would be getting</strike> becomes dry <strike>and it´s same as in</strike> like the inside of a refrigerator.
    Just imagine if <strike>a</strike> food <strike>is </strike>were left in <strike>that</strike> there without any wrap, what<strike>´s gonna</strike> would happen? It would become dry and would be bad.
    <strike>A</strike> skin is the same. If you are outside without any<strike>thing instead of</strike> "wrap", your skin <strike>would</strike> will become dry.
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    よろしくお願いします!
    さなさんは英語を勉強しますか?
    If so we can help each other :)
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    はじめまして ジョザヤと申します。 今まで日本語を一人で勉強したのでなんかここに話すについてはあまりじしんがないです。 漢字はとくに難しいと思います。 ふつうのかいわならりかいできるとおもいますけど 漢字は少ししか分かりません。こうやってひらがなも使って、どんどん漢字を勉強したい。 ともだちもできたらうれしいです。 よろしくお願いします。
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    If I understand what you were trying to say correctly:

    In 1865, Mendel conducted an experiment.

    1. He crossed a purebred tall plant with a short plant.

    2. <strike>Similarly</strike>, he crossed the two <strike>different</strike> characteristic plants <strike>about</strike> until he had plants with seven different traits.

    3. Futhermore, he let all seven types of the first (I believe you mean the second) generation plants self-pollinate.

    Through this experiment, he was the first to realize that hereditary information for two different forms of a trait can coexist within a single individual, with one form masking the expression of the other <strike>form</strike>.

    His 1865 paper ‘Experiments on Plant Hybridization’ is today regarded as the <strike>base</strike> basis of genetic experimentation.

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    In 1865, Mendel conducted an experiment.

    1. He crossed a purebred tall plant with a short plant.

    2. Similarly, he crossed two different characteristic plants w about 7 traits.

    3. Futhermore, he let all seven types of the first generation plant self-pollinate.

    Through this experiment, he was the first to realize that hereditary information for two different forms of a trait can coexist in a single individual, with one form masking the expression of the other form.

    His 1865 paper ‘Experiments on Plant Hybridization’ is today regarded as the base of genetic experimentation.

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    In 1865, Mendel conducted an experiment.

    1. He crossed a purebred tall plant with a short plant.

    2. Similarly, he crossed two different characteristic plants w about 7 traits.

    3. Futhermore, he let all seven types of the first generation plant self-pollinate.

    Through this experiment, he was the first to realize that hereditary information for two different forms of a trait can coexist in a single individual, with one form masking the expression of the other form.

    His 1865 paper ‘Experiments on Plant Hybridization’ is today regarded as the base of genetic experimentation.

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    I live in ABC town in Ota-ward, Tokyo. This is near Kanagawa prefecture.
    A lot of people live Ota-ward; nearly 1 million.
    The town where I live in is not too crowded, and living here is good because there are many hospitals and clinics.<font face="Helvetica, Hiragino Kaku Gothic Pro, Segoe UI, Yu Gothic, Meiryo, MS PGothic, sans-serif"> T</font>here is one about every <strike>about</strike> 100 meters, and there is a supermarket <strike>is</strike> in front of the railway station.

    I don't have family and I live alone.
    <strike>Why</strike> I live here because it is very convenient being near (or being able to use the) two railways.
    One is Tokyu line, and another <strike>one</strike> is JR(Japan railway) line.

    I found this town on the internet <strike>website</strike>.
    I feel the town is very comfortable.

    I recommend that you visit <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">to</strike> a town before you decide to live there.
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