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0 votedOctober 14, 20170So, surgeon “Uzi Tatsumi” and engineers of Olympus started to make a the first practical endoscope having an ideal ideas which is were “not a risk”, “not a patient’s body burden”, “short exposure time” and “clear picture”.
Research Question
How did Olympus make the first practical endoscope?
Methods and Data
・In 1950, Uzi Tatsumi asked engineer of Olmpus to developed the first practical endoscope.
・At first they heard that doctors lived in japan wanted the endoscope.
・They developed the dedicated small camera to endoscope.
・They used the optical fiber to endoscope.
・They developed the first practical endoscope.
Conclusions and Future Research
Developing the practical endoscope contributed to lower death late of cancer. It is easy easier for doctor to use and it avoided physical burden of hurting the patient because it gat gets smaller
[(a) "the" first.
(b) "create": produce something new from nothing, e.g.: "God created the world." / "We create a city in the desert."
"invent": produce something for the first time, e.g. "Bell invented the telephone."
(c) It is+"adjective"+for+"somebody"+to+"verb".
(d) avoid+"v-ing".]0 votedOctober 9, 20170first practical endoscope
Background
Hello, my name is Kohei Sohara and today I will talk about Olympus Corporation, which invented the and it created a first practical endoscope.
In the first place Olympus started to develop a the first practical endoscope because Uzi Tatsumi, who was a surgeon in Tokyo University hospital asked Olympus to make it a practical endoscope.
At that time in 1950s, there were not medical equipment which doctors could want to use to your patients well. If dDoctors can only wanted to look at a medical equipment, doctor only incise a body examine the inner body of their patients by surgery. So However, this would hurt the patient’s body burden is large and it is was so difficult that for the doctors to diagnose detect early detected cancer at the early.
Before 1950, iIn 1932, there was an endoscope which Rudolf Schindler developed invented an endoscope, b. But it was not practical because it was so hard and have had a risk of current leakage of electricity because it was used a leakage of electricity.[(a) I am not sure whether "use to patients" is correct or not.
(b) use past tense.
(c) "no"+noun, e.g. no problem; "not"+noun/adjective, e.g. not a problem. Sorry that I don't know how to say the difference in use.
(d) vocabulary: "diagnose". ]0 votedOctober 9, 20170English class presentation
3 Method and data
Observation of Higgs bosons is very difficult because spin and charge of higgs bosons is zero. Higgs bosons is unstable. So, it immediately decaysed into other particles.
Scientists found that some particles to make particles could be made by collision between some particles and to observe how to decay of the particles could be observed. They think thought higgs bosons also can find could be found by that way, and they do did so. In 2011, they found sign of higgs bosons, but it did not 100% approve the existence of higgs bosons. In 2012, they collected data and proved “the particles is higgs bosons” by proving three conditions of higgs bosons.
4 Conclutions and Future Research
They finally found higgs bosons. They make us possible to understand what is origin of mass. We step up supersymmetry theory and will understand what is dark matter and the origin of the space.[(a) use same tense in one sentence/paragraph.]
0 votedOctober 9, 201711 Background
Hello, my Name is Hidenari Tajima. Today, I will talk about discovering of Higgs Boson.
The classical theory has a problem. The problem is about mass. For To fix this theoretical issue, they think of higgs mechanism.
In higgs mechanism, there are higgs bosons. and to To discover the bosons, the experiment was run.
2 Research Question
Do the the higgs bosons exist?[(a) "To fix" or "For fixing"
(b) "think of": suggest. e.g. "think of an idea".
(c) "I ran the experiment" (active voice) or "the experiment was run by me" (passive voice). ]0 votedOctober 9, 20170To be precise, there are 9 tones in Cantonese. If you have learnt the numbers 0 to 9 in Cantonese, there is an easy way for memorising that 9 tones:
"三"is the 1st tone,
"九"is the 2nd tone,
"四"is the 3rd tone,
"零"is the 4th tone,
"五"is the 5th tone,
"二"is the 6th tone,
"七"is the 7th tone,
"八"is the 8th tone, and
"六"is the 9th tone.Hope this can help!
0 votedOctober 7, 20170
