One day in the public Library of my town
Yesterday I got up at eight o’clock a.m, I had a shower and I had my breakfast ( a glass of orange juice, a cup of coffee with milk and two toasts with virgin olive oil).
As everyday I went out for walk with my dog, my Golden Retriever, her name is Mia.
We went for a promenade near a river. Mia likes this part of the park because there are ducks for chasing.
We are walking near one hour and half.
When we’ve finished our walk then we go back at home where I’ll have to clean to Mia.
As a general rule when I ’ve finished this routine I would begin to study English but yesterday I broke this routine because I decided to go to the public Library that is in the centre of the Town. If you want to go to the centre then you’d have to take a bus.
I borrowed the book titled “Born to Run” written by Christofer Mcdougall a marathon runner.
Some days ago I posted one paragraph about this book. I’ve begun to read it yesterday and I’m liking it. Now I’m reading it in Spanish but when I’ve finished it then I’ll try to read it in English.
This is a book that a lot of runner more ultramarathon runners will have read it.
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One day in the public Library of my town
Yesterday I got up at eight o’clock a.m, I had a shower, and I had my breakfast ( a glass of orange juice, a cup of coffee with milk and two toasts with virgin olive oil).--> You can say "eight o'clock" or "eight am", both are not necessary.
--> Two pieces of toast. Toast is what is called a "non-count" noun.
As everyday I went out for walk with my dog, my Golden Retriever, her name is Mia.
-->I think this would sound best saying "Like every other day, I went for a walk with my dog" or "took my dog for a walk".
We went for a promenade near a river. Mia likes this part of the park because there are ducks for chasing.
-->Not many people say promenade, the more common word when refering to a dog would be walk. "We went for a walk near a river".
We are walking near one hour and half.
--> We were walking for nearly one and a half hours.
When we’ve finished our walk then we go back at home where I’ll have to clean to Mia.
--> There are various ways to say this, for example: When we finished our walk, we went back home where I cleaned Mia.
--> After finishing our walk, we went back home where I cleaned/bathed Mia.
As a general rule when I ’ve finished this routine I would begin to study English but yesterday I broke this routine because I decided to go to the public Library that is in the centre of the Town. If you want to go to the centre then you’d have to take a bus.
--> Centre is correct outside of the USA, in the USA it is spelled center.
I borrowed the book titled “Born to Run” written by Christofer Mcdougall, a marathon runner.
Some days ago I posted one paragraph about this book.
--> This is technically correct, but saying "A few days ago" sounds a little more natural.
I’ve begun to read it yesterday and I’m liking it. Now I’m reading it in Spanish but when I’ve finished it then I’ll try to read it in English.
--> I began to read it yesterday and I am liking it. Now I am reading it in Spanish, but when I finish it I will try to read it in English.
This is a book that a lot of runner more ultramarathon runners will have read it.
--> "This is a book that a lot of runners and ultramarathon runners will have read.
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