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As usual I woke up late and I wear put on my clothes quickly. and harry I hurried to catch the bus and I reached on time however i reached my job I got to work too late. The weather was foggy and all roads are were blocked because there was a traffic jam. We are were stuck but after 30 min we finally can overcome the hustle made it through and reached the company. It was a terrible day.

Sorry to hear about your bad day! I hope it gets better.

Designer school uniforms for elementary school

Recently, an elementary school in Ginza, Japan has announced they will introduce their "standard clothes" (de-facto school uniform) supervised by Armani, that will cost about $730 each. It stirred up some controvery controversy because this is a state-funded school. Although Ginza is the most posh and fashionable area of Tokyo (the land price is the highest in Japan), some argue that it is not appropriate to have the pupils wear such expensive clothes.
Reportedly, the principal of the school commented about stated that the purpose of the decision is the reason for this change is that it is "part of promoting the identity as a pupil student of the Taimei school. " I think it believe this is a bad idea because it could lead children to think name brands equate with their own identity. How can removable items be part of anyone's identity, unless you are in the family business of those brands? This is a shallow thinking and works against education of children in my opinion. Creativity in fashion is great, but promoting the wrong type of attachment to the status-conscious labels will only harm kids.

Very well written! It is fully understandable without the corrections and the few things I edited just made it sound a little bit more natural :)

A summary on the America American Health care system

Health care is mainly divided into two sectors branches. One is public and the other one is private. Like other countries, America also has both a public insurance system and a private one. But I've always heard that the health care in America is relatively expensive as opposed to other countries. Also, I’ve seen a lot of people, as for their health, getting a lot of health-care related things done in advance before going to the US due to the cost of health care. So I looked into it I decided to look into it and I found out that the private insurance system is the main cause to make reason that the health care in America is so expensive. In other countries, the health care is normally run by the government, which means the government has leverage over the medical industry. It’s easier to think that in those countries, In other countries they usually have a like, list where the price of the procedure is already decided. So regardless of what kind of insurance you have, the price is almost the same for everyone. But in America, it doesn’t work because they don’t have this kind of list so how much the bill will be is not decided. That’s why a lot of private insurance companies have to negotiate the prices with the doctor. In other words, depending on what kind of insurance you have, your bill would be more expensive or cheaper than the other person who gets the same procedure. How much the US spends on public health care is about the same size as other countries The US spends about the same amount as other countries on public health care but as for private health care, their spending is way huge much higher. This is how the US medical industry has been working for years and years but it gets got to the point where it is too hard to lower the cost of health care. Some people feel the need to have a single-payer system but there are two sides of to this. One is that it would be hard to stop lobbying from hospitals and doctors because they already have huge power a huge influence over the medical industry. The other one  side is that the doctors would be paid less than they are now and it can hurt their business due to the decrease in their sales. I feel like believe that whatever health care system they have would be good for some but bad for others as America is such a large country. Hopefully they the US can find a best way that would work out will find the best system that will benefit most the majority of the people.

PTE-essay inventions

In this day and age, it is true that our society is full of new inventions, and which but this has triggered a controversial debate among the people. Some believe that these new inventions have some positive effects. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of this statement. This essay will elaborate the impacts of the latest inventions and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, There are numerous reasons why new inventions are benefiting societies, and the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that these fancy gadgets make human beings’ lives easier. For example, facial recognition is one the latest and most powerful technique technologies in the world. People who use this technology are able to pass the terminals without any documental  documented verification. Therefore, the convenience of facial recognition tech cannot be deniable ignored.

Nevertheless, there still remain some pitfalls, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence benefits, and the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that there some people who are always left behind by the latest inventions. For instance, aging people are not capable of adapting the latest inventions. For these people, these gadgets are too difficult for them to use.

Considering all the substantial insights which are outlined above, my opinion is, therefore, I believe that new inventions are the fundamental keys that drive our society to a brighter future. Overall, the development of new inventions should be concentrated more given more focus because they greatly benefit the modern society.

Wow you did really great on this! Good luck to you :)