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Sorry but I will have to correct in English since I couldn't speak Russian. :)
提醒： 他提醒我明天有数学考试。(great)
反对：她每次都反对我的想法。
发现：桌子下他发现他旧照片。
(I think it's grammatically correct. But to me, I prefer "他在桌子下面发现了他的旧照片。" 1. 在…下面=under ; 2. 他的旧照片 should add 的here. 的 can be ignore only when talking about people' relationship and places)
允许： 他不允许孩子们每天看电视。(great)
抱歉：如果我觉得我什么事做得不太好，我就抱歉。
(not really sure what do you want to say here. 1. If you think I did something wrong, I feel sorry. "如果你觉得我什么事做的不太好，我感到抱歉。" 2. If I did something wrong, I would feel sorry. "我觉得如果我什么事情做得不对，我会觉得很抱歉。")
怀疑：她怀疑她的决定问题是对的。(她怀疑她对这个问题的决定是对的。)
判断： 今天我应该判断你的问题。(判断don't go with 问题! 判断……对错 is correct.)
Ruby Lu0 votedNovember 23, 20170 - 商业is more like the word "commercial". You can use this word when you are talking about the "commercial activities"(商业活动). This word is morw used in business reports or official reports.
生意 I think is "business". Like 今天生意好吗？(Was the business going well today?)--when you are a shop owner or something.
业务 is used in office more. It's about office desk jobs or sales. 今天业务量很大，大家都很累了。(Everyone is tired cause today got a lot of work.) Or a vocabulary 业务员(salesmen)--they go out, find customers and sell things.
Hope my explanation helps!
Ruby Lu0 votedNovember 23, 20170 Hello!
＂沙漠之花＂
前些天我看<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>过（了）</strike></font>一部<font style="background-color: yellow;">传记录片（Which kind? Documentary？---It's 记录片 Or a film of a people?---It's 人物传记）</font>＂沙漠之花＂。这部电影<font style="background-color: yellow;">（给我）</font>留<font style="background-color: yellow;">（下了）</font>深刻的印象<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>了</strike></font>。华莉丝出生在索马里的沙漠。就在出<font style="background-color: yellow;">女家（You mean 出嫁？ marry）</font>前夜她搬到英国。华莉丝在餐厅里工作<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>了</strike></font>，<font style="background-color: yellow;">对有名的攝影师熟悉了(认识了有名的摄影师，并逐渐熟悉了。)</font>。她不仅成为世界名模，而且<font style="background-color: yellow;">（还）</font>为妇女法律地位<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>而</strike>（作了）</font>斗争<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>了</strike></font>。<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>真是</strike></font>她<font style="background-color: yellow;">（真的）</font>有坚强的性格！hope it helps!!
Ruby Lu
0 votedOctober 30, 20170学习成语1
你们好。我下面写了几个成语，麻烦你们帮我选几个比较有用的成语，并写下来简单的例句吧。
感谢你们帮忙。
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">爱不释手 我妈妈昨天买了一件新衣服，她对它爱不释手。--My mom bought a new clothes, she love it so much.
坚定不移 如果你找到你的梦想，你应该坚定不移的追寻它。----If you found your dream, you should stick to it.</font>
艰苦奋斗
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">千万百计 他总是千方百计的为自己的错误找借口。---He always find many excuses to cover his mistakes.
前所未有 她取得了前所未有的成就。---She achieved an unprecedented success.
引人注目 Mary今天打扮的十分引人注目。---Mary dressed very impressive today.
爱憎分明 他是个爱憎分明的人。----He is a man of love and hate.
按部就班 学习语言是个按部就班的过程，不能心急。----Learning language is a step-by-step process, you can't be rush.
安居乐业 在这个大城市，民众安居乐业。-----People live happily in this big city.
安然无恙 他被车撞了以后竟然安然无恙的站了起来。---- He was hit by a car, thus he stood up safe and sound.</font>
按图索骥
安土重迁
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">拔苗助长 叫婴儿学外语简直是拔苗助长。----Asking a infant to study a second language is just like making the rice shoots grow by pulling them up.</font>
百步穿杨
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">白首偕老 爱情就是两个人白头偕老。----Love is two people getting old together.
半斤八两 他们两个根本就是半斤八两，都不是什么好人。----- They are two birds of a feather, both of them are not good guys.</font>----------------
I gave you some examples. Although actually we seldome use 成语 in our daily life talking. Only using them in writing and other forml situations like news reports....And of course...in the tests XD
Hope it helps
Ruby Lu
0 votedOctober 30, 20171HSK 5 - 写作 2
请以"最深的爱"为题写一段话。谈谈你对课文父母的表现有什么看法，并说说你和自己父母的关系。尽量用上本课所学的生词，字数不少于100字。
我认为课文<font style="background-color: yellow;">(中)</font>父母<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>的</strike></font>表现<font style="background-color: yellow;">（的）</font>很感激<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">，（Not really sure your meaning here. "I thought the parents in the text showed their appriciation."--It's my correction.）</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>并</strike>(而且)</font>他们俩让我很感动<font style="background-color: yellow;">，</font>因为他们<font style="background-color: yellow;">显得我自己的父母（because they let you think of your parents?---If so, then "因为他们让我想起我的父母。"）</font>。
我父母和我的关系很好。我和父母<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">一生住在大部分时间（一生大部分时间都住在一起<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">。----Um...Though using 一生 is correct. But it will give reader a feeling that "Probably you or your parents were gone." If all of you are still alive, I suggest "我和我父母大部分时间都住在一起。" No need to add 一生.）</font></font><font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">，</font>所以我很尊重他们。反之他们也<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">（很）</font>支持我，
但有<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">（时候）</font>他们也不怕告诉我我犯的错误。"最深的爱" 对我来说是我每次到家的时桌子上<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>遇到</strike>（的）</font>晚餐或我最喜欢的菜 (海鲜饭)。
Hope it helps!
Ruby Lu
0 votedOctober 30, 20172Hello!
1. - 你看过这部电影<font style="background-color: yellow;">吗</font>？- 这部电影我看<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>了</strike>（过）</font>好几<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>个</strike></font>遍<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>。
2. 老师让我们先听两遍<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>绿</strike>（录--lu 4；绿 is lv 4）</font>音，再读一遍课文。
3. 你吃过北京<font style="background-color: yellow;">烤</font>鸭吗？- 吃<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>了</strike>（过）</font>两次。
4. 这儿一共三百块钱。请算一下。
5. 这个鱼香肉丝是我自己做的。你想不想尝一口？
6. 咱们去饭馆吃一顿饭，怎么样？
7. 昨天我回家晚<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>，所以我妈骂了我一顿<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">。---You can also say "昨天我太晚回家"</font><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">------------</font>
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000">Great！Keep on practicing !!</font> </font>
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Ruby Lu</font> </font>
0 votedOctober 30, 20171Hello there~~!
I learned these sentence.
我叫(name) - My name is ...
我姓(familyname) - My first-name is ...
不客氣 - your welcome.
請問這是什麼茶? - Excuse me, What is this tea?
這是烏龍茶 - This is Oolong tea.
你們喜歡喝茶? - Do you like to drink tea?
你要不要喝<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>叻</strike>(咖)</font>啡? - Would you like to drink coffee?
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">他是哪國人嗎? - Which country are you from?---</font>他是哪國人？ Which country is he from? 你是哪國人？ Which country are you from. And don't need 嗎 here, even it's a question XD</font>
請等一下 - Please hold on a minute.
我也是 - Me too.----------
當代中文...Wow! It seems a very serious course !
I think writing Chinese words isn't really hard for Japanese XD But pronouce them can be hard...
Ruby Lu
0 votedOctober 30, 20172Hello
她<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>保管</strike>(一定、肯定、定然)</font>不知道 他们是爱人关系。 He <font style="background-color: yellow;">certainly</font> doesn’t know that they are a couple.
Tā bǎoguǎn bù zhīdao tāmen shì àiren guānxi. <font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">（These three words are which what I often hear and use. For 定然, it's more formal and literary word, but seldom used in daily life.）
</font>
她爱打网球。 She loves playing tennis.
Tā aì dǎ wǎngqiú.
- 这个包多少钱？ How much does this bag cost?
- Zhè ge bǎo duōshǎo qián.
- 它值<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>一快</strike>（一百）</font>五十七元 It costs 157 yuan.<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">(它值157元。is OK. But if you are asking your friend about this. The question is correct. Thus, the answer you wrote here is too...."textbook style" XD. )</font>
<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">We tend to use like "这个包多少钱？--157元” simpler and you can easily add many your opinion in it. Like "157元，超便宜的！（Super cheap!）"、“157元，你觉得贵吗？(Do you think it is expensive?)”</font>
这个汤太<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>热</strike>（烫）</font><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>的</strike>(了)</font>。 This soup is too hot. <font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> （热 is hot, 太热 is too hot but only used in weather! If saying about food is too hot to eat. Then we use 烫.）</font>
Zhè ge tāng tài rè de
今天上午<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>窝</strike>（我）</font>头疼. This morning I had a headache.
Jīntiān shàngwǔ tóuténg.
作者写信了。 The author <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">has written</font> the letter<font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">.---Not really sure here. You mean, the author has already done the letter writing?-- If so, I suggest "作者已经把信写好了。"</font>
Zuòzhě xiē xìn le.
那男孩<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>了不得（超级、非常、极其）</strike></font>高兴。 The boy was<font style="background-color: yellow;"> extremely</font> happy. <font color="#3984c6" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">（These three words are often used. And it's getting more formal--超级oral used, 非常normal used, 极其 formal)</font>
Nà nánhái liǎobude gāoxìng
大家都到了吗？ Is everyone here?
Dàjiā dōu le ma?
我从来没坐过飞机。 I’ve never been on a plane.
Wǒ cónglái měi zuò guo fēijī.Hope it helps!!
Ruby Lu
0 votedOctober 30, 20170
Hello
你养宠物吗？你喜欢什么样的宠物？(perfect)
我认为最普遍养的宠物是狗和猫。(grammatically perfect. But I have two ways of saying this which I prefer to use more. 1. “我认为最普遍 '被' 饲养的宠物… 2. "我认为 '人们' 最普遍饲养…)
你是一位喜欢狗<strike>类</strike>的人还是一位喜欢猫<strike>类</strike>的人？(if you said 狗类 猫类，it's like you said "dog species and cat species" in English. Just like English, saying "dogs and cats" is enough.)
我是一位喜欢猫<strike>类</strike>的人。 在我看来狗<strike>类</strike>太好动，太<strike>响</strike>(吵闹---响 is loud, 吵闹 is noisy)。有人认为狗比猫友善，但是(其实---但 其实= But actually in English. It's a common used combo in Chinese too.)猫(也)可以很亲热(two ways 1. "猫也可以很亲人" 亲人here is not "family, it's a short cut of "亲近人” 2. "猫也可以跟人很亲热/亲近"---by the way, what's "亲热” in English? I can only think of " close to people" that should be 亲近 in Chinese though.)，很好玩。(something is weird with 很好玩...you mean cats can also be funny? If so maybe 很有趣 is ok.)
我堂弟(If you mean he is your cousin and he is from your father's side. Then it's correct. XD)喜欢养鱼。我觉得鱼不是好宠物。不可能摸<strike>摸</strike>鱼(摸摸...haha sure ok. But it's a more girly or cute way to say which is more informal in writing)，不可能跟鱼玩<strike>。</strike>(，)(并且)清理鱼缸很辛苦。堂弟说他喜欢看多彩的鱼在鱼缸里游动(or 游来游去 both are common used.--I saw your words under your writing. Don't worry, 游动 is also a common used one.)。我觉得这样的消遣(ok, but I think 互动 is better. If wrote 消遣here will give me a feeling that you keep a pet is for entertainment. However, keeping a pet can be both fun and angry sometimes right? So I choose 互动 to include all the activity you make.)太没意思。
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Sorry about using yellow color...I tend to use blue for just suggestions.... thus there isn't any other color I can use on the app version.....
Don't worry! You didn't make many mistakes. From your words today, it's going to the next step, instead of "being corrected", you are in "being given suggestions" step now.
Good for you!!
Keep practice!!
Ruby Lu0 votedOctober 25, 20171
