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    今日は、インターネットで知っている人(→知り合った人)とウィーチャットで喋った。彼は昔から中国語を勉強して、20年以上になりましたので、(→"20年以上中国語を勉強しているので"の方が良い)とても上手になりました。私が(→は)独学なので、喋る経験が少ないし、ついて(→ついで)に間違いをすれば、すぐ改めさせた。こんな喋ったまま(→たくさん喋ったので)、時間が速く経って、でも、たくさんこと(→色々なこと)を覚えたようだ(→覚えることができた could)。本当に嬉しいわ!
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    October 12, 2017
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    わたし の しゅくだい を した ほうが いい。(→すべきだ。)だいたい にかげつ にほんご を べんきょう しませんでした。わたし は いそがしい から(→ので)、じかんがない あります(→です)。 でも、きょう べんきょう しました ですよ! (→したんですよ!)しわけ(→しかも)きにゅう (→エントリーシート)も かいます、(→書きました。)そして れんしゅう (に)いい です。 ありがとうございます! I should do my homework. I have not studied Japanese in almost 2 months. I am busy, and there is no time. But today, I studied! I also wrote this entry, and that is good practice. Thank you!
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    October 11, 2017
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    お早う。起きています。日曜日、拇趾は[→親指が]とても痛かったです。だから、ベッドにいつも[→ずっと]入ていました。でも、僕は今に元気です。[→今、僕は元気です。]だから、幸せです。月曜日、友達と遊びました。友達はレディングに住んでいます。[彼は]イケアに勤めました。[→ています。]でも、学生をなります。だから、[→なので]今勉強しています。
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    October 11, 2017
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    Please help me to correct my sentense!! I am hitting the books really hard, so that I master English. So I want you to cooperate in order to do that. If you help me, I will help you mastering Japanese. Background Hello, I'm Takafumi Tsugawa, and today I'd like to talk about Professor Aoyagi and his work to create a injections that mimics mosquito's stings. Speaking of injections, people usually may refuse to hit it because it is so painful and a burden on patients. Some of them may refuse to hospital by reason of hating injections. On the other hands, not only when you catch a cold and have the vaccination, there are many people who have to inject under the skin every day. For example, person with diabetes have to inject under the skin to administer insulin many times a day. So research of painless injections was advanced for such people. You have some background information on painless injections. Now let's look at the focus of Aoyagi's research. Research question How should he develop a painless injection ? Methods and Data 1. He discovered the fact that a pain by injections is due to structure of needle. 2. His research team studied structure of mosquito's stings. 3. They discovered that mosquito's stings have two jagged needles and a normal needle. 4. Many companies refused the development of needles since it is different to develop. 5. But a small factory in a town produced it by the latest abrasive techniques. 6. It enabled to puncture an exact location. Conclusions and Future Research Actually it enabled to administer a drug without feeling pain. As of 2016, for the achievement, it has been shipped one million. Scientists aim to administer anyone, anywhere and expand cosmetics in future.
    October 10, 2017
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