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A drunk Japanese guy in London
I'd been having a home tuition course for a fortnight in Brighton, the UK in October this year.
One day my teacher took me with him to London as an excursion. We visited stunning and magnificent buildings like Buckingham Palace, Westminster Abbey, Big Ben and so on. Finally we went to a pub after visiting T the Tower of London. He ordered beer and I had sweet cider. The taste of it was really good It tasted really good and also it was easy to drink for me. Eventually I had a pint and a half. Actually In truth, I hardly drink in Japan.
After a while, my face turned red like the sunset and I could hear my heart beating clearly; and also it was getting faster and faster. But I thought I would become normal soon. So we walked to the nearest station to and got to Victoria Station. When I got on the tube, I found how dangerous I was. I mean I'd been sick badly and seeing everything was looked yellow for five minutes. I said to myself in my mind like 'Takashi, you are Japanese. You mustn't do anything rude or unpleasant against other people on a train, especially in London. You can do it! Yes you can!' To tell the truth I was about to vomit in the public, but I did manage to prevent a disaster because of my encouraging words. Fortunately I wasn't the first Japanese person who vomits on the underground in London and I'm still a perfect gentleman.とても面白かったです!そして英語はいいです!The yellow is for clarity and grammar and the green is suggestions to make things sound more natural. I am American so I apologize if I changed something that was in British English.
0 votedDecember 17, 20171I did do a medical checkup in Meguro hospital yesterday.
I did do medical checkup in Meguro hospital yesterday.
I’m not good at getting injections and seeing blood…
Teller checked some medical checkup. (What does this mean?)
When I checked my B blood-pressure my blood pressure it was 127 over 87…
I have high blood pressure! Why?!
I don’t know.
I have been jogging 3 times a week.
I have only drank alcohol once a week.
I haven't been didn’t working to much time.
I need to rest time?? No! Therefore I don't need to rest.
I wouldn’t… (Wouldn't what?)Good entry! Keep it up!
0 votedDecember 17, 20170I Drank a Lot.
Yesterday my company was did had a drinking party with an associate company.
From At the beginning of the this year, we got a new huge working project.
The project are is really difficult. It is about communication, teamwork, woking system, etc.
Actually we all met all for the first time yesterday.
We were spoken to about and discussed many things. and discuss.
The meeting finished and then we went to bar and Thai food restaurant.
We enjoyed to talking and discussing! (only because talking and discussing are the same thing)
Thank you reading my notebook!You're welcome! It was well-written, just a few edits:)
0 votedDecember 17, 20170Ted Talks : Being true to yourself
This story is about your ability to believe that you can do anything without setting limits on yourself.
Caroline Casey is full of vitality and she is such a woman who has always challenged what she wants to do herself.
When she was a child, she wanted to be Mowgli from "The Jungle Book." She admired the dynamic boy who was true to himself.
When she turned 17 years old, she accidentally (what do you mean here? That she suddenly found out?) knew that she has been legally blind since birth.
Actually, her parents didn’t tell her that because they didn’t want her to place to put any labels on her and didn’t want to limit her possibilities. Even though she couldn’t see well, she grow up surviving any difficulties and she continued doing what she wanted to do, even after being told she was blind.
A few years after getting a consulting firm job, she really could see very little and unfortunately had to quit the job as she could see very little. She was depressed, lost her belief and kept thinking over and over in her mind what she should do. Finally, she realized that she wanted to be is the Mowgli.
She decided to be an elephant handler (like Mowgli). She had no idea where to start but she somehow raised enough money for 6,000 cataract eye operations, walking across India with an elephant. (Did she have 6,000 separate cataract operations? Or did the cataract operations cost 6,000 [some type of money]?)
She thinks when you believe from the bottom of your heart, you can make it happen. No matter who you are, you shouldn’t label and limit.Really awesome job! The grammar is really good, the only thing I noticed really were some tense shifts within sentences (switching from present to past). The yellow edits are for grammar or if something is unclear and the green edits are to make it more natural-sounding:)
0 votedDecember 17, 20171- 作文:カタラとアーン 私の1番好きなアニメキャラクターは「アバター」のカタラです。「アバター」では、人たちはまほうで水か土か火事か空気を使えます。人は手と足で動いて水、土、火事か空気はまほうで動きます。昔に火事国は全部空気国人をおろしたり南水国と土国とたたかったリして100年の世界せんそうが始まりました。 でも、さいごの空気国人はまだ生きています。さいごの空気国人はアバターです。アバターは世界の中で1番強い人です。アバターなら水、土、火事と空気をまほうで使えます。空気国人が死んだ時、アバターは100年ぐらい氷の中でねました。カタラとお兄さんは氷でアバターを見つけました。アバターの名前はアーンです。それからカタラとアーンは友だちになります。 アーンは空気のまほうなら知っています。だから、水、土と火事のまほうをなりわなきゃいけません。カタラは水のまほうを知っているのでアーンに水のまほうを教えます。それから、カタラとアーンは土のまほうの先生と火事の先生をさがしています。 火事の先生は長い話があります。名前はズコです。初めにカタラの町をたたかいましたが2年ぐらいの後にいい人になります。カタラはすごくおくりましたがズコはカタラにちゃんとあやまっておそいでカタラとズコは友達になります。 いっしょうにアーンとカタラとお兄さんとズコと土のまほうの先生は世界を直します。カタラはすごく強くて親切な女の人だし、いい心があるし好きです。November 16, 201700
- 作文二:カタラ 私の1番好きなアニメキャラクターは「アバター」のカタラです。「アバター」では、人たちはまほうで水か土か火事か空気を使います。手と足で動いて水か土か火事か空気はまほうで動きます。昔に火事国は全部空気国人を下ろしたり南水国と土国をたたかったリ100年の世界戦争が始まりました。
でも、さいごの空気国人はまだ生きています。最後の空気国人はアバターです。アバターは世界の中で1番強い人です。アバターなら水と土と火事と空気をまほうで使えます。空気国人が死んだ時、アバターは100年ぐらい氷りで寝ました。カタラとお兄さんは氷でアバターを見つけました。アバターの名前はアーンです。それからアーンは友だちになって世界を直します。カタラはすごく強くて親切女の人だしいい心があるし好きです。
November 6, 201720 The Meaning of Adversity
The theme of the second unit of our Chinese textbook for this semester is "Confronting the Adversity," and there is an article named "One Prospers in Worries and Hardships, and Perishes in Ease and Comfort" written in classical Chinese by Mencius, a philosopher who lived in over 2000 years ago and who was regarded as the second sage after the Confucius in Chinese traditional culture.
I read (or memorized?) this very article many years ago and still can recite it from memory. In this article, Mencius began with several famous stories sharing a common plot that a humble person was promoted to a position of power from a unpromising environment. For instance, a shepherd named Bailixi was appointed as a Prime Minister of Qin State in the slave market. After that, Mencius concluded that a person destined to achieve greatness must suffer great pains both physically and mentally before he succeeds, and that adversity is unavoidable.That is, it is the adversity people go through that helps them complete formidable tasks. Adversity stimulates their spirit, toughens their nature and enhances their ability.*The only reason I suggested splitting the last sentence up is because of the placement of the phrase "by stimulating their spirit...enhancing their ability." The placement makes it sound like they complete their tasks by stimulating their spirit...enhancing their ability rather than adversity helps people complete their tasks because adversity puts people through x, y and z trials/tribulations. But the grammar was correct otherwise:)
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