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Richard Chen
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Sep 26, 2017
Great lesson with Ruben! He's a very good student! I am glad to share my knowledge of Chinese linguistics with him!
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    Eine höfliche E-MAIL

    Sehr geehrte Frau König,

    ich bitte mich um Entschuldigung. Ich kann den Deutschunterricht nicht besuchen, weil ich mit meinen Freunden für zwei Tage lang[1] im nach Japan verreise. Könnten Sie bitte mir die Hausaufgaben mitteilen?
    Mit freundlichen Grüßen
    Evelyn Wang

    [1] Du kannst entweder für zwei Tage oder zwei Tage lang sagen, aber beides zusammen geht nicht.

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    November 12, 2017
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  • Corrected

    Der Termin

    Sehr geehrter Herr Schneider,
    entschuldigen Sie Ich bitte um Entschuldigung. Ich sollte am Samstagvormittag mit Ihnen die Wohnung besichtigen. Aber meine Mutter hat vorläufig mich mir (kurzfristig) mitgeteilt, dass ich meinen Vater im vom Flughafen abholen muss. Deshalb kann ich mich nicht mit Ihnen treffen. Können wir den Termin verlängern verschieben?
    Mit freundlichen Grüßen
    Evelyn Wang


    overall really good.

    - Kurzfristig means like "last minute" which might be good here.

    - verlängern means "to extend". But you want "verlegen" or "verschieben" (both ways to say "move").



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    November 12, 2017
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     My Yesterday!

    Yesterday, I went to a restaurant to eat Japanese food. I ate Misonikomi Udon. Misonikomi Udon is a kind of stew with noodles. The stew was made out of Miso[1]. It was has a strong taste, but I like it [2].

    When I came back to my home, I watched YouTube. I like comedies, so I watched them. It was fun! The time passed so quickly when I watched YouTube[3].
    These are my Yesterday’s story:)

    Note 1: The stew was made out of Miso. This is correct if you want to say that yesterday the stew was made out of Miso, but usually that might not be the case. If the stew is always  made out of Miso, then you want to say The stew is made out of Miso.

    Note 2: has a strong taste. Again same idea as [1]. has a strong taste means it usually has a strong taste and that's expected. If you want to highlight that yesterday the taste was strong, or that it had an unusually strong taste, then you would use had a strong taste.

    Note 3: The time passed so quickly when I watched YouTube. Similar idea as before. If you want to say time always passes quickly when you watch YouTube, then time passes quickly when I watch YouTube. If you want to say that yesterday specifically time passed quickly, then the correction above is used (both in past tense).


    Your English is really good, these are grammar quirks to learn to bring it to an even higher level :) 頑張ろう


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    November 8, 2017
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