My Yesterday!
Yesterday, I went to a restaurant to eat Japanese food. I ate Misonikomi Udon. Misonikomi Udon is a kind of stew with noodles. The stew was made of Miso. It was strong taste, but I like it.
When I came back to my home, I watched YouTube. I like comedies, so I watched them. It was fun! The time passed so quickly when I watch YouTube.
These are my Yesterday’s story:)
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My Yesterday!
Yesterday, I went to a restaurant to eat Japanese food. I ate Misonikomi Udon. Misonikomi Udon is a kind of stew with noodles. The stew was made of Miso. It had a strong taste, but I liked it.When I came back home, I watched YouTube. I like the funny videos. It was fun! Time passes so quickly when I watch YouTube.
This is my story from Yesterday.:)
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My Day Yesterday!
Yesterday, I went to a restaurant to eat Japanese food. I ate Misonikomi Udon. Misonikomi Udon is a kind of stew with noodles. The stew was made with miso. It has a strong taste, but I like it.When I came back to my home, I watched YouTube. I like comedies, so I watched some. It was fun! Time passes so quickly when I watch YouTube.
This is the story of my day yesterday. :)
Hi, Atsushi! Thanks for sharing your story with us. The udon sounds really good; it's getting cold in Fukui now, so I'm in the mood for some filling and hot food.
I hope these corrections help you. :)
-Charlie
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My Yesterday!
Yesterday, I went to a restaurant to eat Japanese food. I ate Misonikomi Udon. Misonikomi Udon is a kind of stew with noodles. The stew was made out of Miso[1]. It was has a strong taste, but I like it [2].When I came back to my home, I watched YouTube. I like comedies, so I watched them. It was fun! The time passed so quickly when I watched YouTube[3].
These are my Yesterday’s story:)
Note 1: The stew was made out of Miso. This is correct if you want to say that yesterday the stew was made out of Miso, but usually that might not be the case. If the stew is always made out of Miso, then you want to say The stew is made out of Miso.
Note 2: has a strong taste. Again same idea as [1]. has a strong taste means it usually has a strong taste and that's expected. If you want to highlight that yesterday the taste was strong, or that it had an unusually strong taste, then you would use had a strong taste.
Note 3: The time passed so quickly when I watched YouTube. Similar idea as before. If you want to say time always passes quickly when you watch YouTube, then time passes quickly when I watch YouTube. If you want to say that yesterday specifically time passed quickly, then the correction above is used (both in past tense).
Your English is really good, these are grammar quirks to learn to bring it to an even higher level :) 頑張ろう
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