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    In the following article I would like to give my opinion, on the topic of if advertisements encourages encouraging us to buy items that we do not need. or if they inform us about items that are helpful in daily life.
    First of all, I would say that all advertisements are produced to sell a thing something. Whether it is necessary or not, it is the they follow the same goal. Therefore you can imagine that a lot of people are buying things that they will never use. But they will argue that it is important for this certain situation, which was descriptive in the commercial. Like the kitchen aid I bought many years ago. The ad promised that cooking and baking will be fun, because you do not have to do anything. In the end I didn't have fun and so I never used the device again. This is just an one example and there would have been several more.
    The other argument that advertisements represent new things that will change our life new and life-changing things is also true. Because all the companies are telling that they have the saying they have best product and that it will change your future in a way somehow. What they do not say is, if  whether your life will be positively changed or if there is just less money in your wallet, because the item you bought is just was a waste of money.
    In the end I would like to summarize the points I just explained. All the advertisements are made for to encourage customers to buy something. Most of the time it says that it  it will affect your life positively. So I would suggest to all people to think about the benefit and if they really need that thing or if it is just a waste of money.




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    I'm Iwona. I'm from Poland. I'm 25 years old. I live in <strike> sounth of </strike> southern Poland. A<strike>c</strike>ctually Actually I'm working for a French company. In my free time I like: reading criminal<strike>'s</strike> books, walking, traveling and meeting with friends. I have one sister<strike style="">s</strike> and a lot of friends. I love them. I'm learning English because I want to have another <strike>work </strike> job. Can you help me?

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