Could you correct below? please

Tomas is my best friend, so he's a great person. He’s 23 years old, and he just graduated from college with a degree in Mechanical engineering, but he doesn’t have a job yet. His parents are very friendly and respectful people, his mother is a teacher and his father is a carpenter, he also has an older sister. He and his family are very good*and they’re a very happy family.

 (very good... what? You could say: are very nice/lovely/kind/friendly) 

Tomas’s a very happy person, handsome, studiuos, very positive and friendly. He always smiles and he likes to meet new people and to have many friends. He’s a responsible person and very organized.

In his free time he likes studying, swimming and also one of his hobbies is to go to the movies to watch horror movies, he likes listening to music and knowing  getting to know new places in the city.
The only problem with Tomas is that he’s a little very can be easily distracted and shy, but when he gets know people very well he can be really funny, sometimes he’s a little forgetfull  forgetful. 



Very. very well written! Almost perfect.

Should we do what we like or what we can earn a lot of money from?

It is too terrible if after you graduate, you realize that you don't enjoy your major, and you are not happy day after day at your work in the company. However, you can earn a lot of money in your current job,and you need that money to pay for everything in life: house, food, studying etc. In addition, your current job is really great job, which most people are dreaming about the salary and benefits. Therefore your family don't want you to give it up and they are even protest a lot. If you do follow what your relatives said, you may have a good future, have a lot of money for your family, your children. However, what should we do? if we don't have any enjoyment in the job now, a day in the company is like a day in hell. Many people will give up their job immediatly, but it is not easy for many people, because each of us always have responsibily for many things, not only for our own life.