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Could you correct below? please Tomas is my best friend, so he's a great person. He’s 23 years old, and he just graduated from college with a degree in Mechanical engineering, but he doesn’t have a job yet. His parents are very friendly and respectful people, his mother is a teacher and his father is a carpenter, he also has an older sister. He and his family are very good and they’re a very happy family. Tomas’s a very happy person, handsome, studiuos, very positive and friendly. He always smiles and he likes to meet new people and to have many friends. He’s a responsible person and very organized. In his free time he likes studying, swimming and also one of his hobbies is go to the movies to watch horror movies, he likes listening to music and knowing new places in the city. The only problem with Tomas is that he’s a little very distracted and shy, but when he gets know people very well he can be really funny, sometimes he’s a little forgetfull.

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Could you correct below? please

Tomas is my best friend, so he's a great person. He’s 23 years old, and he just graduated from college with a degree in Mechanical engineering, but he doesn’t have a job yet. His parents are very friendly and respectful people, his mother is a teacher and his father is a carpenter, he also has an older sister. He and his family are very good*and they’re a very happy family.

 (very good... what? You could say: are very nice/lovely/kind/friendly) 

Tomas’s a very happy person, handsome, studiuos, very positive and friendly. He always smiles and he likes to meet new people and to have many friends. He’s a responsible person and very organized.

In his free time he likes studying, swimming and also one of his hobbies is to go to the movies to watch horror movies, he likes listening to music and knowing  getting to know new places in the city.
The only problem with Tomas is that he’s a little very can be easily distracted and shy, but when he gets know people very well he can be really funny, sometimes he’s a little forgetfull  forgetful. 



Very. very well written! Almost perfect.

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