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HI! Bonjour! Bongiorno! Zdravo! BomDia! !اسّلام عليكم My name is Achmad! :D I'm from South Africa and I love learning other languages so that i can connect with all kinds of people! I would love any new language experience but my main focuses are French, Italian and Arabic :D: I can help a little bit with English too :P I'm not active on Facebook or Skype but i do use Whatsapp and Instagram :)
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    The Day I Saw My Friend Really Unhappy

    He was here standing against the wall holding his head. I asked him about what happened to him but he did not respond so i decided to sit near him in silence to support him through his sadness (saying "support him in..." means you're helping him do that thing. Say "support him through.." to indicate that you're helping him while he is sad not helping him to be sad). One moment later, after he stopped crying, he told me about everything . He has a problem (the correct phrase is "to have a problem", not "to get a problem") with his wife and nobody can help him because she's so vicious and manipulative. That brought him to take an important decision which is divorce. Although he was engaged (متزوج =  married) for seven years and he also has children. Everyone in the district knows him as reliable, down to earth, simple, helpful and loyal so if he did this that means everything was done to solve his problem but unfortunetly it doesn't work . He remembers the day when she was introduced to his family, no one could stand her. You know those things happen sometimes without explanation then they told him to break up with her but he didn't pay attention to it because he didn't see anything bad in her but after seven years he regrets not listenning to his family after she became materialistic and different to what she was in the beginning . Even though it was a bad experience, it helped me to grow. So the moral of the story is; always take the time it necessary until to know the person well ("always take the necessary time to get to know the person well) and take advice, (plural for 'advice' is written with the same spelling as it's singular) and ask those who know you well, especially your family, before making an important choice . I think in the world there is someone for each person who is suitable for you, you just have to find them.

    You know everybody, this friend i was talking about, it was me but don't worry i'm ok i just wanted to share my experience with you.


    I hope you are doing well my friend and don't worry, things happen for a reason and perhaps life will get better now :) 

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    September 22, 2017
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    September 20, 2017
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     It is not a secret that a lot of people do some of these activities just because other people do them or just for the purpose of being more popular in social media. In this regard, extreme activities are very well-considered amongst young people, therefore, they these sports are popular (you can say , 'they post videos of themselves doing these popular sports') on social media with the goal of obtaining more “likes” and social approval. My sister is a compelling example of this. She started practicing these dangerous activities just because her friends practiced them as well as in order to increase her popularity on Facebook and Instagram. As a result, she actually raised the number of her followers, in the same way that her friends had done it before.
    In conclusion, I strongly believe that people practice dangerous activities because they provide extreme and pleasant sensations and because they are in fashion and are well-considered in social media.


    I'm so sorry, something happened with my Internet and the corrections didn't want to submit but here's most of what I've done lol I hope it helps 


    Ps: you write really well keep it up!!

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    September 20, 2017
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    [ I recently started boxing 73 ]

    Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
    you go about writing it?
    Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.

    I recently started boxing. I went twice to a boxing gym which is near my neighborhood. It was interesting and so impressive. When I was on the train, I saw there many times. I've been wanting to do it for a long time.

    The gym owner used to be close with a world champion. If he won a match, he could try to the world match (I'm sorry I don't understand what you're trying to say here). He is one of the legends in Japan.

    When I saw him at first, he looked very calm and decent. He taught me how to punch and some basic forms. I sweat a lot! I'm enjoying boxing and I'm enjoying my life too.
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    September 20, 2017
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    Hi Everyone

    Hi there!  I'm Jean-B and I'm new to Italki, I am currently learning English but I want to learn more languages after English such as Spanish, Chinese and Portuguese. But I think it's better to master one language before moving on to another language ( vous pouvez dire, "another one"). Very soon I will complete my TOEFL course and I hope this platform will help me make it. After that, (vous pouvez dire "there after") I will learn Spanish and so on. Ok, this is just a quick introduction. I look forward to making friends from all over the world. Thanks for taking your time, reading and proofreading this post.
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    September 10, 2017
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    Corrigez moi s'il vous plaît Bonjour à tous !! Je m'appelle Achmad et je suis nouveau sur iTalki! J'ai lu déjà un entrée et j'ai reçu des bons réponses et je veux remercier les gens qui a les fait. À la moment, je me reste au lit et je voir à l'extérieur et les beaux chose là-bas. Je voir les arbres, j'entends les oiseaux et comment ils chantent. Je pense que je vais rester au lit le jour entier parce-que je me sens paresseux aujourd'hui XD. Non, j'ai trop mieux devoirs que faut faire. Alors, j'espère que vous allez passer une bonne journée!
    September 10, 2017
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    A writing task

    As far as I'm concerned, not all of the statements in the second exercise are myths.
    I have firmly held beliefs that people use fewer hand gestures when telling a lie.
    Indeed, when doing so, we are so focused on the words coming out of our mouths and on avoiding actions which could betray our lie that we pay attention to keeping control of our body and, therefore, use fewer hand gestures.

    Concerning the other statements, I'm not sure about the one according to which avoiding eye contact would be a sure sign of deception. However, I can say that I make all the other signs of lies when thinking.
    For this reason, I would say that the related statements are widely held beliefs which are simply not true.


    This is really good :) keep it up !! 

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    September 10, 2017
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    Bonjour à tous ! Je m'appelle Achmad, je parle anglais et j'apprends aussi l'arabe et le français. Je peux vous aider si vous voulez?
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    September 10, 2017
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    J'adore apprendre les langues étranger! :D Bonjour à tout! Je m'appelle Achmad et je viens d'Afrique de Sud. Chui étudiant dans une université où j'etudie le francais et l'arabe. J'aime beaucoup étudier les langue étrangère parce que ça me fait trés heureux à parler avec des peuples différents en leur langue. Alors, je sais que mon francais c'est très mauvais XD. J'espère que vous passez un bon journée!! :) Au revoir!!
    September 1, 2017
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