[ I recently started boxing 73 ]
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you go about writing it?
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I recently started boxing. I went to a my boxing gym twice which is near my neighborhood. It was interesting and so impressive. When I was on the train, I saw there many times. I've been wanting to do gradually.
The gym owner used to be close to a world champion. If he won the one match, he could try to the world match. He is one of the legend in Japan.
When I saw him at first, he looked very calm and decent. He taught me how to punch and basic forms. I sweat a lot. I'm enjoy to boxing as my life.
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[ I recently started boxing 73 ]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how wouldyou go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.
I recently started boxing. I went twice to a boxing gym which is near my neighborhood. It was interesting and so impressive. When I was on the train, I saw there many times. I've been wanting to do it for a long time.
The gym owner used to be close with a world champion. If he won a match, he could try to the world match (I'm sorry I don't understand what you're trying to say here). He is one of the legends in Japan.
When I saw him at first, he looked very calm and decent. He taught me how to punch and some basic forms. I sweat a lot! I'm enjoying boxing and I'm enjoying my life too.
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[ I recently started boxing 73 ]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how wouldyou go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.
I recently started boxing. I went to a my boxing gym twice which is near my neighborhood. It was interesting and so impressive. When I was on the train, I saw there many times. I've been wanting to do gradually.
The gym owner used to be close to a world champion. If he won the one match, he could try to the world match. He is one of the legend in Japan.
When I saw him at first, he looked very calm and decent. He taught me how to punch and basic forms. I sweat a lot. I'm enjoy to boxing as my life.
Hello, here is a suggestion for your boxing essay :) Take care. Monique.
I recently started
boxing. I started this sport because when I rode the train, I would often
see the boxing gym, and gradually began wanting to learn how to box. When I
made the decision to go to this gym, which was near my neighborhood, I was
impressed, and I became interested and inspired enough to take lessons. At the
gym, I found out the owner used to be a world-class boxer who would have fought
in a world championship fight, but missed the opportunity to do so when he
lost the match which led up to the world championship. He is considered one of
the greatest boxing legends in Japan. I remember the first time I saw him. He
looked very calm and decent. He taught me how to punch and how to learn the
basics in a proper manner. I sweat a lot when I box. Boxing has now become
a very enjoyable part of my life.
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