Does this sound correct?

Habari, Ninawakaribisha kwenye video yangu. Leo, mimi najifunza kuzungumza Kiswahili. Kiswahili ni lugha rahisi kujifunza, lakini baado ninahitaji mazoezi zaidi "kuweza kuizungumza kwa ufasaha"(this is just a short addition to help the sentence sound more advanced, leaving it at zaidi is also fine). Leo, ninajifunza kuandika kwa Kiswahili. Hayo ni kwa leo. Baadaye.

I like Germany. part 2

I moved from Cologne to Dresden in Germany.
Dresden is a historical place.
I went around Dresden's old city area.
The buildings are very solemn and beautiful.
I stay in Dresden's new city area.
It's also a nice place.
Many Germans go out and drink beer all night.
I also went out and about the city.
It was lively and fun.

My english exam is in a week! OMG

I have to practice a lot,so can you help me by correcting these [senteces?] sentences for me?


-If she stops crying, we might understand what her problem is.
-My cat will lose weight if she doesn't eat any pasta.
-If my clients arrive tonight,Matthew will take them out for dinner.
-If we go there by car,we will arrive earlier than expected.
-If you send me an sms, I'll reply.
-If we don't conserve energy, it will turn off in an hour.
-Water evaporates when it is boiled.
-If the thief hadn't closed the door so loudly,no one would have heard him.
-The building was in bad condition.The pavements were broken and the roof was about to collapse.
-It is really raining, If you don't take an umbrella,you'll get wet.
-If Janice didn't cook so well,I wouldn't eat so much.

You could say " I would like to buy reasonable yet fashionable black Chinese leather high heeled shoes

Why should we hire you?

You should hire me because I am hard working and very dedicated to my work.
I have worked part-time before and I often received unexpected praises from my employer because of my attitude and hard work.
If I am hired, I will make every effort to succeed at my work and build a good customer relation.
I am confident that I will be a valuable asset to your company.
I hope you can give me a chance to prove my abilities in your organization.