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I like Germany. part 2 I moved from Cologne to Dresden in Germany. Dresden is historical place. I went around old city areas in Dresden. Buildings are very solemn and beautiful. I stayed at new city area. It's also nice place there. Many German went out and drank beer at all night. I also went out and around the city. It was lively and fun.

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I like Germany. part 2

I moved from Cologne to Dresden in Germany.
Dresden is a historical place.
I went around the old city areas in Dresden.
The buildings are very solemn and beautiful.
I stayed in the new city area.
It's also a nice place there.
Many Germans/German people went out and drank beer at night/all night.
I also went out and around the city.
It was lively and fun.


Dresden sounds like a beautiful place. My cousin live sin Berlin. I went to visit her and I loved the city. Dresden sounds very different though.

Very well done! I only madde a few corrections. I hope they are helpful.

"the" written in green is optional. The word "The" makes a sentence more specific. Without "the" it becomes a general statement.


For example:

Buildings are very solemn and beautiful = All buildings are solemn and beautiful

The buildings are very solemn and beautiful = The buildings in this story (Dresden) are solemn and beautiful.

Stayed in/Stayed at - "Stayed at" usually refers to staying in a very specific place. "I stayed at home" or "I stayed at the hotel" 

"Stayed in" is usually used for more general areas. "I stayed in Moscow." or "I stayed in the historic district"

Very well written!

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I like Germany. part 2

I moved from Cologne to Dresden in Germany.
Dresden is a historical place.
I went around Dresden's old city area.
The buildings are very solemn and beautiful.
I stay in Dresden's new city area.
It's also a nice place.
Many Germans go out and drink beer all night.
I also went out and about the city.
It was lively and fun.

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