Great time

I had a great opportunity to speak in English this afternoon. I had left my home without any plan. Then my friend asked me if I could come to the place where she was<strike>.</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strike> Which </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">, which</font> </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">was</font> where I was heading to. So<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">, </font>I answered 'Yes'. Then she said she was with a tourist from <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</font> <strike>Foreign</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> foreign</font> country. And she want<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ed</font> me to have lunch <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">together</font> <em>(optional, since we now it's with that person.) </em>with that person. I was pleased to be there. So I went there and <strike>have </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">had</font> a nice time :) but I couldn't speak well enough. I realized I need to practice harder. And also I realized how much I want to live abroad again.

 

「Then」と「So」を使いすぎですね。あと、ほとんどの文章が「I」で始まっていたので、違う書き方も考えてみてください。

例えば、

Great time

This afternoon, I had left my home without any plan, then my friend asked me if I could come to where she was. Since it was where I was already heading, I replied 'yes'. She told me that she was with a tourist from a foreign country, and she wanted me to have lunch with that person. I went there and had a nice time :) but I couldn't speak well enough. Even though it was a pleasure to be there, I realized that I need to practice harder, and that I really want to live abroad again.

It was a great opportunity for me to speak in English! 

 

 

 長くてすいません！笑