Great time
I had a great opportunity to speak in English this afternoon. I had left my home without any plan. Then my friend asked me if I could come to the place where she was. Which was where I was heading to. So I answered 'Yes'. Then she said she was with a tourist from Foreign country. And she want me to have lunch together with that person. I was pleased to be there. So I went there and have a nice time :) but I couldn't speak well enough. I realized I need to practice harder. And also I realized how much I want to live abroad again.
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Great time
I had a great opportunity to speak in English this afternoon. I had left my home without any plan. Then my friend asked me if I could come to the place where she was
「Then」と「So」を使いすぎですね。あと、ほとんどの文章が「I」で始まっていたので、違う書き方も考えてみてください。
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Great time
This afternoon, I had left my home without any plan, then my friend asked me if I could come to where she was. Since it was where I was already heading, I replied 'yes'. She told me that she was with a tourist from a foreign country, and she wanted me to have lunch with that person. I went there and had a nice time :) but I couldn't speak well enough. Even though it was a pleasure to be there, I realized that I need to practice harder, and that I really want to live abroad again.
It was a great opportunity for me to speak in English!
長くてすいません！笑
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Great time
I had a great opportunity to speak in English this afternoon. I had left my home without any plan. Then my friend asked me if I could come to the place where she was. Which was where I was heading to. So I answered 'Yes'. Then she said she was with a tourist from a foreign country. And she wanted me to have lunch together with that person. I was pleased to be there. So I went there and havehad(still past tense) a nice time :) but I couldn't speak well enough. I realized I need to practice harder. And also I realized how much I want to live abroad again.ほとんど正しいです。
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That's great! Where did you live in the past? Was the tourist a native speaker? I think one of the best things about learning English is that you can use it to talk to people from all over the world!
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