Rationale for the choice of theme for thesis
Please, correct this text for thesis introduction.
Thank you!
Today I would like to tell you about my scientific research. I joined the faculty of the University of Information and Telecommunications Systems and Technology at Belgorod State University in 2017. My major is theoretical foundations of computer science. This specialty is related to information technology that helps to achieve high results and realize their goals. (whose goals?)
My research activities are focused on the examination of the decision support systems (DSS). DSS is computer-based automated system which helps people to make decisions in difficult situations for various fields.
I’m going to develop DSS for medicine in my thesis. DSS in health information systems (HIS) are used to assist managers and heads of business in making decisions based on the analysis of a large amount of statistical information. For example, it would help with creating working arrangements, outlining perspective development paths or warning of a possible shortage of a specialist connected to a high workload or seasonal outbreaks of disease. Medical decisions can be characterized by a lack of knowledge, limited time resources, the inability to attract competent experts, and/or incomplete information about the patient's condition. These factors are the causes of medical errors, which can lead to further loss of patient health. Therefore, the topic of my research is relevant today.
In this study, I work under the guidance of Professor Zhilyakov Evgeny Georgievich, who is the head of the department of information and communication technologies and systems.
The topic for thesis was selected consciously. I’ve already worked for «SoftTrust» company for 2 years. The company develops software for health information systems. I’m QA engineer and this topic of my thesis is a good opportunity to expand my knowledge in the automation of medicine and in applying my research in practice.
(Consciously really isn't the right word. I think that you mean to convey that the topic was chosen after careful deliberation or deliberately. Good luck! Sorry, I don't know why my changes aren't showing up clearly)