Revise my letter(,) please. What can I do to save our planet?
It is a good time to change habits and take care of the planet. The Earth is our home and there are
live many living beings
that live here. These are some tips
(we can follow) to take care of the environment:
* Use public transport. I usually
go to work on foot (this is ok but sounds better to just say "walk to work"), so I
do can exercise, but if you live in a big city you should use the bus or
a car pool. You can also ride a bike when the weather is nice. Check your car
when before you travel
(.) For example, if the
wheels tires are
empty low on air then you will spend
more on petrol
more.
* Save energy at home. I use energy efficient light bulbs and
my I have appliances
that use spend little energy. When I wash my clothes I dry
it them on the clothesline,
so I don´t use a dryer. The walls of my house have insulation
(.) In this way Therefore, I use little
heating energy in
the winter and
in summer
(.) I don´t turn on the air conditioning because it is not very hot.
You can also install photo-voltaic panels on your roof.
This will help you will to save money on your bills and take advantage of the solar energy.
*Buy local food. In this way, we can save on packaging like plastics, boxes or cans. A lot of products need containers to be transported from other cities and the transport would be used less.
* Recycle. When I go to the supermarket I use my cloth bags to
keep carry the products
(no comma here) I have bought. I get my bills and letters
on through the internet in my
email and I use recycled paper to save trees.
* Eat less meat. Animals need a lot of food to grow. That food is farmed in the countryside and it needs a lot of water.
*Plant trees. The trees provide us
oxygne oxygen and remove carbon dioxide.
* Be a catalyst. I sometimes talk to my children, my family and friends and I explain to them all
the things we have to do and
the things
(no comma here) we don´t have to do to take care of the environment
(.) In this way, they can also help.