Short story
Once upon a time there was a crow that she had a nest on the top of a tree. There was also a snake’s nest near that. The snake ate crow’s chickens when they came out of eggs. When he did it frequently. The crow got angry. She went to reynard who was her friend and told him, “I’m going to save my chickens from the wrongdoer”. The Reynard asked her: ‘’how are you going to do it?’’
Crow answered, “I want to blind him when he is sleeping so that my dear chickens to be safe from his evil intent.”
Reynard said to her, “it isn’t a wise solution because wise people fight against the enemy in some way in which there isn’t any danger for them. I will tell you a way that if you do it correctly, you will be victor and the snake will be died.”
The crow said,” no time should ignore the advice of friends and no time should act against of wise people.”
Reynard told her, “the correct way is that you fly up the city and find a shine jewelry of there then fly down and take it next let people to pursuit you. When you arrived near the snake’s nest leave it there then go awa. At that time people don’t follow you more. They will find the snake’s nest and kill him.”
The crow went to the city and did it. People who follow her saw the snake. They immediately contused the head of him. Therefore the crow and her chickens were safe and saved.
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Short story
Once upon a time there was a crow that she had a nest on the top of a tree. There was also a snake’s nest near that (or: nearby). The snake ate the crow’s chickens chicks when they came out of their eggs. When he did it frequently. The crow got angry. (He did this frequently and the crow became angry.) She went to Reynard who was her friend and told him, “I’m going to save my chickens chicks from the wrongdoer”. Then, Reynard asked her, ‘’How are you going to do it?’’The crow answered, “I want to blind him when he is sleeping so that my dear chickens chicks will to be safe from his evil intent.”
Reynard said to her, “it (better: This) isn’t a wise solution because wise people fight against the enemy in some way in which there isn’t any danger for them. I will tell you a way that if you do it correctly, you will be the victor and the snake will be died dead.”
The crow said,” no time Never should I ignore the advice of friends and no time never should I act against of wise people.”
Reynard told her, “The correct way (to do this) is that you to fly up to the city and find a shine jewelry of shiny jewel from there and then fly down and take it(.) Next(,) let the people to pursuit pursue you. When you arrived near the snake’s nest leave it there then go away. At that time people don’t won't follow you anymore. They will find the snake’s nest and kill him.”
The crow went to the city and did it. The people who that followed her saw the snake. They immediately contused the head of him (you could either say: crushed his head or cut off his head). Therefore Finally the crow and her chickens were safe and saved.
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Once upon a time there was a crow that she had a nest on the top of a tree. There was also a snake’s nest nearby that. The snake ate the crow’s chickens chicks when they came out of eggs hatched. When he did it frequently, Tthe crow got angry. She went to rReynard who was her friend and told him, “I’m going to save my chickens from the wrongdoer”. The Reynard asked her: ‘’how are you going to do itthat?’’
Reynard said to her, “it isn’t a wise solution because wise people fight against the enemy in some way in which there isn’t any danger for themselves. I will tell you a way that if you do it correctly, you will be victorious and the snake will be died dead.”
The crow said,” no-one time should ignore the advice of friends and no-one time should act against of wise people.”
Reynard told her, “the correct way is that you fly up the city and find a piece of shine jewelry shiny jewellery of there then fly down and take it, and next let people to pursuit pursue you. When you arrived near at the snake’s nest leave it there then go away. At that time The people don’t will not follow you any more. They will find the snake’s nest and kill him.”
The crow went to the city and did itwhat the snake said. People who followed her and saw the snake. They immediately contused the head of him beat him over the head. Therefore That's how the crow and her chickens were safe and saved.
Very good. Baby birds are chicks.
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