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Cats, My Wonderful Friends
Cats are the most wonderful animals in my opinion. I like, I have been breeding cats since I was 6 years old, so it is for more than 17 years till now. and I know a lot about cats: how they live, how they treat each other, and how we have to treat them. I have 9 cats now. They are my friends. :)Good job! I would love to see you expand this piece and tell us more about your knowledge of cats and the types of cats you own now. What do they look like? What are their personalities? Explain what it is that you find wonderful about cats.
0 votedAugust 24, 20171Only a very rare family finds the courage to endorse a “disobedient” sister or daughter who left her husband and accept her back into the family. They do this only if the woman was banished from her husband’s house. If she made the decision to leave of her own volition, even if she left because she faced constant beatings, her choice to leave the abusive husband means next to nothing in Caucasian society, which tends to blame a woman for everything. This way The detrimental traditions of the region ensure that a woman endures a life of misery and misunderstanding even within her own family.
Wonderful essay! Keep up the great work!
In these circumstances The only hope for a woman stuck in this kind of predicament is the help provided by local NGO, “Women for development.” Libkan Bazaeva, 68, is one of the only three three women working in this organisation that fights to defend the rights of battered women who faced domestic violence. The organisation has already effected significant changes and it is going to do much more than that. Thanks to NGO's work, the region outlawed early marriages and an ancient custom of stealing a bride. Now these three powerful women are trying to promote “human” divorce and to defend the children's rights passing during the separation of their parents. By now They have already done impossible things and their help is indispensable for hundreds of woman. However, it is difficult to be very vocal about women's rights in a region like Chechnya, so the organisation has to tone its messages down to avoid the backlash that would impede its important work.0 votedAugust 18, 2017215.08 Hope for Chechen Women
Taking a closer view of the situation with women's rights in the southern Russian region Chechnya discloses an awful reality. Unfortunately, deeply entrenched Chechen traditions, which essentially outlaw divorce, foster domestic violence and discrimination against women in the region.
A woman who decides to divorce faces a lot of hurdles, especially if she has children. Only a handful of women will be able to end up the marriage peacefully and keep their children, or at least get an opportunity to see them from time to time. In the majority of the cases, children remain with their fathers, and no amount of blood, sweat and tears will give these desperate women their children back. Even if a court decides in her favor, the ruling will fall on deaf ears. as In Russia, there are no effective ways to implement the court’s verdict. The worst thing that can happen to a father who refuses to give the child to its mother is an administrative fine. Under this system, kids become hostages to their fathers, and a woman knows that the only way to get them back is to return to husband’s house and continue to bear humiliations and beatings.
I will continue my corrections above as I am about to exceed the character limit.0 votedAugust 18, 20170Antennas ( correct my mistakes please)
Antennas are one of the most important communication elements where they are used to send and receive electromagnetic signals.
Antennas are a metal body, mostly usually made of copper or aluminum. where Antennas transform electrical signals into electromagnetic signals that spread in move through the air at a speed equal to the speed of light, to transmitting signals to their reception areas.Great work! Keep it up!
0 votedAugust 17, 20171I Believe in Miracles.
Yes, I believe in miracles.There were miracles in the past.In the era of the prophets. These are some of the world's greatest miracles of the world :
_The great miracle of Hazrat Muhammad's (saw) in revelation, the book of Quran.
_The miracles of Jesus who healed the sick.
_The miracle of Mary's am. To the birth of conceiving and bearing Jesus.
_The miracle of Moses' to know parting of the sea.I enjoyed reading your notebook entry! Keep up the great work! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
0 votedAugust 17, 20173My Job
Hello everyone. I would like tell you about my current job and compare it to my previous job. to begin, I tell you that Currently I am an engineering assistant and before I was a quality inspector. Now I have a better salary than before, although my current job demands more effort and a higher knowledge. Before, I used to work 48 hours per week and now I work 8 hours less per week. Now I can sleep in one hour more than before. This is not bad for me. When I was a quality inspector I had to wear a uniform, but now this is not a requirement, so I can wear more casual clothes; but nothing too casual, like sweatshirts or sports shoes, but shirts, pants and formal shoes. Another difference is that before I did not have an office to work in, just a small desk, and now I have a bigger desk and an office.0 votedAugust 16, 20172Waves
AM waves are loaded by adjusting capacity. The data on the carrier is added through the change in the capacity of the wave (its length from top to bottom). This system began to decline due to poor sound quality compared to FM waves.
PM waves are usually used to broadcast world news and events. The most notable disadvantages are confusing the stations during the transition, which and are then affected by the confusion. However, PM waves are characterized as long-term, and can operate outside the cities, and are easy to build.The first paragraph is very clear, but the second paragraph is a little jumbled, grammatically and semantically. You need to establish the connection between your nouns and pronouns more clearly. Part of this is probably just my ignorance of the subject, but I found it difficult to trace the logic of the second paragraph, so my corrections may not reflect your meaning even though they are syntactically sound.
0 votedAugust 15, 20171Improving Each Day
After a long time away, here I am again! I'm feel that I'm achieving my goals in English. The last time I was here, I was just starting to learn English. Actually, I was learning French and Dutch too. I decided to make learning English my priority this time. Once I've learned English, I would like to learn either French or Dutch. I'm not sure yet which of these languages I will chose to learn next, but I do know that I love learning languages. I'm falling in love with English. This is my motivation. I also have to confess that I love the British accent. I think it's amazing. Yesterday, I was listening to a BBC radio program and I tried to copy the accent. On YouTube I'm following some British channels. I haven't forgotten the American accent, which is also very beautiful. I like the variety of accents. I hope to improve my English grammar by writing these notebook entries. I have not been in the habit of writing them, but I promised myself that I'll write an entry at least once a week.0 votedAugust 15, 20171
