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Improving Each Day
After a long time away, here I am again! I'm feel that I'm achieving my goals in English. The last time I was here, I was just starting to learn English. Actually, I was learning French and Dutch too. I decided to make learning English my priority this time. Once I've learned English, I would like to learn either French or Dutch. I'm not sure yet which of these languages I will chose to learn next, but I do know that I love learning languages. I'm falling in love with English. This is my motivation. I also have to confess that I love the British accent. I think it's amazing. Yesterday, I was listening to a BBC radio program and I tried to copy the accent. On YouTube I'm following some British channels. I haven't forgotten the American accent, which is also very beautiful. I like the variety of accents. I hope to improve my English grammar by writing these notebook entries. I have not been in the habit of writing them, but I promised myself that I'll write an entry at least once a week.Improving Each Day
After a long absence, I'm here again; I'm feeling that I achieving my goals in English. The last time I'd been here I started a new way of learning English. Actually, I was learning French and Dutch then too, but I decided to focus only on English at this moment because it is my priority. After that I want to learn French or Dutch, which one, I do not know yet, but I know that I love learning languages. I've fallen in love with English and this is my main motivation. I also confess that I love hearing the British accent, which I find amazing! Yesterday, I was listening to a BBC radio program and I tried to copy the accent. And, on YouTube, although I'm following some British channels, I cannot forget about the American accent that is also particularly beautiful--I like the variety of accents. So, I hope to improve my grammar even though I have no habit of writing, but I promise myself that I'll start to do it weekly.
Hi Marcelo. Overall, a very good job! Pay more attention to your spelling, punctuation, the capitalization of proper nouns, and length of sentences. While nothing wrong, per se, with the way you expressed yourself, whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.
Improving Each Day
Here I am again, after a long time away.I feel that I'm achieving my goals in English. The last time I was here I was starting a new way of learning English. Actually I was learning French and Dutch too, but I have decided to focus only on English for now, because it's the most important to me. After that I want to learn French or Dutch; I do not yet know which, but I know that I love learning languages. I'm falling in love with English, which is my main reason for learning it. I must admit that I love the British accent, which I find amazing. Yesterday I was listening a BBC radio program and I tried to copy the accent. On YouTube I'm following some British channels, but I don't forget American channels; their accent is also very beautiful. I enjoy the variety of accents.
I hope to improve my grammar too. I have not been writing regularly, but I have promised myself to do it every week.
It's good to hear how enthusiastic you are about the English language. Good luck!
Improving each day
After a long time I'm here again, Ifeel that I am achieving my goals in English. The last time I've been here I started a new way learning English, actually I was learning: French and Dutch too, but I decided to focus only on English this moment, because this is my priority, after that I want to learn French or Dutch, I do not know yet but I know that I love learning languages, I'm fell in love with English this is my motivation. I also confess that I love the British accent is amazing yesterday I was listening a BBC radio program and I tried to copy the accent, on youtube I'm folowing some British channels, but I do not forget the american accent that also is particulary beautiful, I like the variety of accents. So, I hope mprove my grammar I have no habit writing but I promiss myself that I'll make it weekly.Want to progress faster?
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