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Nowdays,  websites launch more and more garbage news on their  webpages. To draw the attention of readers, too many websites use too much of almost naked women or girl's photos . I think reading these news and watching these photos has no value .  Besides that, all those news and pictures waste  too much of readers' time. I think the most harmful result happens when adolesents watch these picutre and news. They will not concentrate their spirit on their study but always dream of how to play with girls or boys. So every website should take responsibility on society and our children.

 I hope you agree with that...