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Nowadays, the websites are making putting more and more garbage news on theire their webpages. To draw the attention of readers, many websites use too many almost naked nude women or girl's photos. I think reading these news stories and looking at theses these photos has no value. And besides that, all those these news and pictures have wasted too much of the reader's too much time. I think the most harmful result is happening when the adolescents watch see these picutre pictures and watch this news. They will not concentrate their spirit on the studying, but always dream of how to play with girls or boys. So every website should take responsibility for the society and our children.

please help me to check my essay, thanks a lot!

Nowdays,  websites launch more and more garbage news on their  webpages. To draw the attention of readers, too many websites use too much of almost naked women or girl's photos . I think reading these news and watching these photos has no value .  Besides that, all those news and pictures waste  too much of readers' time. I think the most harmful result happens when adolesents watch these picutre and news. They will not concentrate their spirit on their study but always dream of how to play with girls or boys. So every website should take responsibility on society and our children.

 I hope you agree with that...