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- The phrase "check it out" is used more of a mental image while "check it" contains the physically mark something off or investigating the concern (the it). Say you are doing inventory and you are counting the cereal boxes to see if it correlates with the number on the sheet. If it does you check it. While "check it out" is more of a phrase to depict of what you are looking or picturing. An example would be "Check out that dog over there urinating at the person's leg," without physically having to go over there because you can clearly see it.0 votedJuly 30, 20170
Classes again!?
Tomorrow I'm starting my classes again. I'm a bit confused this semester. Many things to learn and also learn about living by myself, it is stressful you know? including living by myself (you mentioned learning and you don't need to mention it again because you are giving an example). It is stressful, you know. (In the English language, if you are going to ask a question, it starts with the the five W's, the D's or How or If...) I'm not the guy who likes to talk so much, so I don't have many friends. and I don't know if my friends see me as a friend of theirs. They usually do meetings where they promote group study, but I prefer to study alone, They usually have study groups but I prefer to study alone, it's more peaceful. And the teachers? Well... some of them I already know, but the majority I don't. The ones I already know are bossy and usually don't accept when someone contest them. In fact they hate it! (It's/That's) pretty bad! People that already (already took them) studied with them say that most of them are bossy and just a few of them promote peace (this is my way of saying that these they are nice guys). Anyway, I still have to do (do what? pack your backpack, clean it, buy it, organize it...) my backpack to get back (resume or continue college) to college. Maybe this semester I will improve myself in the speed of light! Who knows!?
Bye-bye.Good luck on your studies and also living by yourself. It will all get better with time. You have good content. I would say some minor improvements on structure and placement of words.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170Holy Elena`s island
Holy Elena`s island in Atlantic Ocean being covered forest in past. Now on area island has not forest.Тhe reason for his disappearance were people,which were brought to the island goats.In the past, Holy Elena's Island in the Atlantic Ocean was a covered forest. Now it's an island with no area of forest. The reason for this disappearance was because of people bringing goats to the island.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170Football game yesterday
I am one of members of a member of the football team in at my university. (A team has members so there is no need to say, "I am one of the members." The only time you would say one of the members is when you are specifically labeling a position such as "I'm a one of the members of the coaching staff of a football team.") I had a game in Aomori prefecture, which is pretty far from the place I live. So it took a lot of time to drive to the ground I played field I'm playing, which was really hard difficult and made me sleepy. In the team, I played with my old friend against an old friend of mine. He and I played football in the same team in my school age, now plays. He and I played football on the same team during our school age days. Now it feels so strange to play football with him as an enemy. Furthermore, (Furthermore is an adverb, not two separate words) he was originally a field player but now he is a goal keeper now. Anyways, it was a really good time to play football with my an old friend mine. And it was good to talk with him after a while as well. To keep For playing football for a long time, it gave me a memorial memorable experience. (A memorial is a noun while a memorable is an adjective.)
Thank you.Overall a good entry. I would say to be concise in what you are writing because it confused me at first what you were writing.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170How would I be
Usually I wake up at 6:15 and I have breakfast.
When I go to work, by car, I usually go out leave home about 7 o'clock, . But when I need to go by bus, I need have to run and go out home about 6:40. get out of the house by 6:40 a.m.
When I go by car, I need to pick up my husband, in his job and usually he go out at 7 in the evening. because his job ends at 7 in the evening.
Well, I arrive home, eat the dinner and take a bath. I've arrived home. I have eaten dinner and took a bath.
Probabilly, it is 9 in the evening. At 10 I go to sleep and my day finish. It is probably 9 in the evening. At 10, I will go to sleep and my day will be finish.
If I were entreprener an entrepreneur, I would like to have a different life.
I know that an owner sometimes works much more than employee (either an employee or employees), but I prefer to think that I would have more time to live.
I would like to wake up near 7 in the morning, eat breakfast, take a bath, do yoga (it could be at home or at the gyim), study some languague (English or Spanish) then go to work, eat lunch, resume work and after 4 in the afternoon, go back home, rest until my husband to arrives.
When we want to accomplish something we need to put a lot of will until to get it. I believe that the change depends just on me.0 votedJuly 30, 20170Today
Today I am off but I have a lot of work to do. (Or you can say, "I am off today and I have a lot of work to do.") First I need to upload all of my personal records on the website. , Then I should start on a new post and work on different books. Today is an exciting day for me. I am so happy.
I just want to count each second and not waste any time. Life is worth living and we should strive hard for it.
The world is an amazing place. You discover new things every day.
3 mordad 96.Improve more on capitalization and sentence structure. Overall, good entry.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170Fiction #1
My doctor advised me to refrain from alcohol, because my health examination resulted in bad because my health exam results were bad. Uric acid level, which he regarded as a problem, is thought to rise by taking in alcohol. My rising high levels of uric acid is thought to be caused by consumption of alcohol. (As a pre-nursing student, everything is measured by levels but it's the results of whether it's high or low or stable or in range that is being described are the origins or factors of complications/problems.) Unfortunately, I’ve got worse the value year by year, and decided to improve my daily life. Unfortunately, I've gotten worse year after year and decided to improve my life. I heard that drinking a lot of water was effective to lower the uric acid level, because it could dilute the accumulated matter in my body. (When using "because" in the middle of a sentence, generally a comma is not needed before hand.) The thing to do for now is to take in much water. What I must do for now is to take in as much water as I can.Overall very good but once speaking of a particular topic, structure and vocabulary changes a bit. Keep up the good work.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170Saint Petersburg
Dear friends, please help to make this text more complicated using advanced vocabulary. Also, error correction is much appreciated. Thanks a lot!
St. Petersburg is not my hometown but since I have been living here for 8 years, I can say, with no without a doubt, that this city is like my second home.
My feelings to the city are ambiguous, though. My feelings for this city is ambiguous. (Try not to include though at the end because you later describe and contrast the differences and likes perfectly. Although feelings are plural, the closest noun determines the singular or plural of the verb. Or you can rewrite it as, "My feelings are ambiguous towards this city.") On the one hand, this is a really beautiful city with unforgettable architecture and hospitable people. Almost all of my friends are also living here. On the other hand, due to the size of the city and the rhythm of life here, I can see my friends quite rare rarely see my friends. Also, the weather here is disappointing. If you move to St. Pete, be prepared not to to not see the sun for 7-8 months but the wind and the rain will often follow you. (Since there is no sun because of the wind and rain, the latter half of the sentence should be rewritten as, "be prepared to not see sun for 7-8 months because of constant wind and rain.")
However, Saint Petersburg gives a lot of opportunities for young people, and for me this is the best city in my country. (Trying to not change your composition of this sentence, a better way of wording it if you are one of the young people that benefits from the city is, "However, St. Petersburg is a city of opportunities for young people such as the likes of me, I say it is the best city in my country.")Sidenote: I live in St. Petersburg, Florida in the United States of America. It is named after St. Petersburg, Russia and now I know why because of the constant wind and rain. And like you, St. Petersburg is not my hometown either and it is what I would also call a second home. Good grammar and structure. Keep up the good work.
0 votedJuly 30, 20170
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