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My doctor advised me to refrain from alcohol, because my health examination resulted in bad. Uric acid level, which he regarded as a problem, is thought to rise by taking in alcohol. Unfortunately, I’ve got worse the value year by year, and decided to improve my daily life. I heard that drinking a lot of water was effective to lower the uric acid level, because it could dilute the accumulated matter in my body. The thing to do for now is to take in much water.
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Fiction #1
My doctor advised me to refrain from alcohol, because my health examination received bad results. The uric acid level, which he regarded as a problem, is thought to rise by taking in alcohol. Unfortunately, my uric acid level has been getting worse year by year, so I have decided to improve my lifestyle. I heard that drinking a lot of water was effective to lower the uric acid level, because it could dilute the accumulated matter in my body. The thing to do for now is to take in a lot of water.0
Fiction #1
My doctor advised me to refrain from alcohol, because my health examination resulted in bad because my health exam results were bad. Uric acid level, which he regarded as a problem, is thought to rise by taking in alcohol. My rising high levels of uric acid is thought to be caused by consumption of alcohol. (As a pre-nursing student, everything is measured by levels but it's the results of whether it's high or low or stable or in range that is being described are the origins or factors of complications/problems.) Unfortunately, I’ve got worse the value year by year, and decided to improve my daily life. Unfortunately, I've gotten worse year after year and decided to improve my life. I heard that drinking a lot of water was effective to lower the uric acid level, because it could dilute the accumulated matter in my body. (When using "because" in the middle of a sentence, generally a comma is not needed before hand.) The thing to do for now is to take in much water. What I must do for now is to take in as much water as I can.Overall very good but once speaking of a particular topic, structure and vocabulary changes a bit. Keep up the good work.
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Fiction #1
My doctor advised me to refrain from alcohol, because my health examination resulted in bad high uric levels.High uric acid levels, which he regarded as a problem, is thought to rise by taking in alcohol.
Unfortunately, I’ve got worse the value got worse year by year, and so I decided to improve my daily life. I heard that drinking a lot of water was effective to lower the uric acid level, because it could dilute the accumulated matter in my body.
The thing for me to do for now is to take in much water.
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