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    In conclusion, I think both statements are valid but under respective conditions. With regard to social class or family background, people in different situations will make different choices. With a relatively good family condition, one may feel inclined to look for an ideal job, thus achieving self-value by chasing his/her dream. However, if someone urgently needs to support his/her family, then job security should be the first thing to guarantee.




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    In contrast, job security is also a sensible choice, given the reasons presented below. First, for those who want to make a living, a permanent job is a better choice because it can provide stable income and ensure a sustainable and enjoyable life, as doing whatever one wants may lead to unemployment or frequent job-hopping. Having a permanent job is not to just simply earn money, but to achieve a solid reputation and stable social network. For example, a civil servant is more likely to be considered as trustworthy compared with a freelancer.
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    My edits are below in green - Had to submit it in 2 comments since the system only allows for 5000 characters.

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    Since one's job is becoming a more indispensable part of modern life, peoples' attitudes towards their jobs have undergone great changes as well; some believe that having a favorable job is of vital importance, while others argue job security should come first. The following essay will debate the two arguments in further detail.

    There are some convincing arguments supporting the notion that job satisfaction has a great influence on one's career. Firstly, job satisfaction could bring a great sense of achievement or identity, resulting in one putting more energy into his/her work, which contributes to overall success in one's career. Secondly, a man or woman who has passion for his/her job would never fail to achieve happiness. For the busy, energy-drained, modern person, being in a good mood at work helps him/her relieve stress which leads to better health. Additionally, doing work one prefers means there is a higher chance to work with like-minded colleagues, since people with the same values or opinions are more likely to prefer the same job. Thus, both work efficiency and satisfying comradeship will result.


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