Correct me, please

Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might be better my writing skills. I wish to better my oral skills as well, so I am looking for English speakers. I like to discuss various topics, especially global things. I study at the university and most of all I want to visit America next year. It might be a breakthrough in my English. I learn English for many reasons: chatting, speaking, traveling, work and so on. I will be happy to be corrected, thanks

My trip to Turkey. Is it correct?

Today I want to say some words about my traveling to Turkey. I love to travel. This year I visited Fethiye. It was very interesting and amazing trip.
Firstly, I thought that it would be boring to lie under the sun and to swim. But it was my mistake. Turkey is very old and ancient country with an interesting story and beautiful places to visit. I saw the magnificent castle on the top of the mountain, went to Oludeniz to visit a dead town and saw olive islands.
Now my attitude to Turkey is changed. I fall in love to this beautiful country.

The only person have not been sleeping

In Brazil is at about 2 am and I am at Uncle's house for a short visit. I arrived today and I go back tomorrow.
Here all people are sleep, right now, but I can not sleep. I have no sleep. Maybe, I want to drink water, I want to read any book...
So I am listening to music on a cell phone and writing in Italki, although I want to sleep.

Thank you for reading my text

There are many native speakers here, but it's difficult to get a language partner here

It's also happened in Bahasa Indonesia (related with English), such as Pantai Gading (Ivory Coast), Yunani (Greece), Belanda (Netherlands), Mesir (Egypt)

Try to learn Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian Language). That's one of the easiest langauge.