Correct me, please Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might be better my writting skills. I wish to better my oral skills as well, so I am looking for E

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Correct me, please Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might be better my writting skills. I wish to better my oral skills as well, so I am looking for English speakers. I like to discuss various topics, especially global things. I study at the university and most of all I want to visit America next year. It might be breakthrough in my English. I learn English for many reasons: chatting, speaking, travelling, work and so on. I will be happy to be corrected, thanks

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Correct me, please

Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might be better my writing skills. I wish to better my oral skills as well, so I am looking for English speakers. I like to discuss various topics, especially global things. I study at the university and most of all I want to visit America next year. It might be a breakthrough in my English. I learn English for many reasons: chatting, speaking, traveling, work and so on. I will be happy to be corrected, thanks

Correct me, please

Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might help me improve my writing skills. I want to improve my speaking skills as well, so I am looking for English speakers. I like discussing various topics, especially global topics. I'm studying at university and most of all I want to visit America next year. It might be a breakthrough in my English. I'm learning English for many reasons: to chat, speak, travel, work and so on. I will be happy to be corrected, thanks.

Good job. I've used yellow if there was a mistake that needed changing and orange when the change was just to make it sound more natural. One tip; When an action is happening now use present continuous (subject + be + verb-ing)

Correct me, please

Hi, this is my first entry here. I am going to write here at least once a week. It might be better help me improve my writing skills. I wish to improve better my oral skills as well, so I am looking for English speakers. I like to discuss various topics, especially about global issues. things. I study at the university and most of all I want to visit America next year. It might be a breakthrough in my English. I'm learning English for many reasons; to chat, to speak, to travel, to work and so on. I will be happy to be corrected, thanks.

Nicely written with a few minor errors. If you are serious about having a language exchange, feel free to send me a message here. Good luck ;-)

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