Temperatures In these temperatures, you are likely to catch a cold, tomorrow is getting it will get even colder and start snowing

Well done though :)

If you like reading books, you know that choose what you will be choosing what you will read next it is a very big problem. I have twenty or twenty five books in queue, these books are waiting until when I will be have enough time for to read them. Now I'm reading a book which called "Rockets and people". It's documentary a nonfiction history book about Russians starting the space industry. The man who wrote this history book was an engineer in the USSR and he tells us how after the war in 1945, Russian and amercan American soldiers tried to find Germane German (((((technology)))) for to develop the space and military industry in them these/those countries.

Well done. Because I'm not sure what you were trying to say about the German technology, I found it hard to correct this for you. But other than that I hope it helped.

Also a Documentary is not appicable to books, only movies/series. That's why we use the word nonfiction instead

Hi. My name is Edyta. I'm 23 years old. I am from Poland. I live in Cracovia. I have two sisters and two brothers. My mother is fifty and father is fifty-three, my sisters is are twenty and twenty-two, brothers is are both twelve. I like animals. I have two dogs. I working work in a supermarket as a cashier. I can speak a little (bit of) English.

Wes Anderson!

What an artist this guy is, love his unique style. His camera use is amazing, the (extremely artistic) limited colour palette, narative style movies with distinctive visual.

What a man.

Sitting in my room alone, thinking about you, writting writing a song.. you know, I remember everything you saying said to me "I wont won't let you down". But you changed so suddenly, you got your things without saying anything.. "I couldn't don't understand", I said "What's goin' on.." you looked at me and said "sorry, I have to go" You don't know how much I'm missing you (or: You don't know how much I miss you).. I'm still here just waiting for you.. I don't know where are you you are now.. I'm calling your name but you can't hear me. Maybe you will never come back again, maybe you cannot understand... I have no choice, I can't forget you.. so hold me tight and say "I'm with you" I don't know why you have to go....

Xxxxx Emma

Ps Just not sure what you mean with "I have no choice" in this sentence? And also just wondering how (s)he can hold you when (s)he's gone? Maybe it could be something like "I wish you were here to hold me tight and say "I'm with you." Just a suggestion ;)

Well done!