Why you have to go?
Sitting in my room alone
thinking about you, writting a song..
you know I remember everything
you saying to me ´´I wont let you down´´.
But you change so suddenly
you got your things without saying anything..
i couldnt understand, i said ´´whats goin´ on..
you looked at me and said `´ sorry i have to go``
You dont know how much I missing you..
i´m still here just waiting for you..
I dont know where are you now..
i calling your name but you cant hear.
maybe you never come back again,
maybe you cannot understand...
i have no choice i cant forget you..
so hold me tight and say ´´ im with you´´
I dont know why you have to go....
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Sitting in my room alone, thinking about you, writting writing a song.. you know, I remember everything you saying said to me "I wont won't let you down". But you changed so suddenly, you got your things without saying anything.. "I couldn't don't understand", I said "What's goin' on.." you looked at me and said "sorry, I have to go" You don't know how much I'm missing you (or: You don't know how much I miss you).. I'm still here just waiting for you.. I don't know where are you you are now.. I'm calling your name but you can't hear me. Maybe you will never come back again, maybe you cannot understand... I have no choice, I can't forget you.. so hold me tight and say "I'm with you" I don't know why you have to go....
Xxxxx Emma
Ps Just not sure what you mean with "I have no choice" in this sentence? And also just wondering how (s)he can hold you when (s)he's gone? Maybe it could be something like "I wish you were here to hold me tight and say "I'm with you." Just a suggestion ;)
Well done!
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