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    和我的朋友们有一个见面

    (though)上个礼拜我工作比较忙很多,而且(and)有些家庭职责,但是星期五我还是(still)开车去南莫拉维亚看了(了=past tense)朋友们。

    though i was

    (though)虽然上个礼拜我工作比较忙很多,而且(emphasize)有些家庭职责,但是(but)星期五我还是(still)开车去南莫拉维亚看了(了=past tense)朋友们。

    比较忙 and 很多 are used to descripe the status of your work or life in last week, like using adverb of degree(很、较)  in enlish. if a noun is modified by more than one adverb of degree,in chinese these adverbs need to be connected with a conjunction, such as (adversative conjunction) 而且、并且。if you don't want to use the conjunction, you need to put a noun  in front of the adverb of degree。like 上个礼拜我工作比较忙,工作很多。

    咱们我们是五个朋友 All the conditions which are suitable for 咱们 can be replaced by 我们。You should use 咱们 as little as possiable for the simple reason that few conditions not suitable for it。咱们 can only be used in the situation that people to whom you speak stand in the range of your vioce.

    大学时候我们一起住在一套学生宿舍公寓。学生宿舍 is frequently referred to as 学生公寓,学生宿舍 usually in school,and 学生公寓 usually in society。when you arrive in a city with no friends and relatives, for saving money 学生公寓 is still a best place to live,though it is uncomfortable。

    现在,虽然我们都住在各种的地方,但是每年我们聚会在一起。

    一般情况下,我们在一个南莫拉维亚小村见面。南莫拉维亚是一个葡萄酒有名的地区。那里的气候适合葡萄生长。

    我的5个朋友中的一位住在这个小村庄(1)。他的家里有一个酒窖和,他生产自己的葡萄酒。那次聚会我们喝了 被 这个朋友做的葡萄酒, 边吃东西边聊天。

    被:be+v-ed,A 被 B ..... is another way of saying B 把 A............。We rarely use the first one(A 被 B ..... ), unless we want to emphasize B(B leads to the result of A).

    他的家= his hourse    他的家里=in his hourse
    (1) – how to say “ One of the five friends lives in that village”?

    多谢你们的改错

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