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    JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th(writing about having a pain in my fingers)

    I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

    JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th

    So, have you ever had pain in your fingers? Speaking about me, I have somehow pain in my fingers right now, rather than, My fingers had gone to sleep. Here, It's 9:43AM, in the morning, I woke up and had breakfast right 2 hours ago. I thought that this pain would go away from my fingers, yet, to my sadness, it hasn't done that right now. On google, it says I have to go see a doctor, but when I heard so like this "go see a doctor" or "you take a medichine immediately", I always think that there would be no other way of saying so than. Of course, I know, I have to see the doctor as soon as possible, but I couldn't get around to do that easily, and more than anything, doing this is really pain in the neck(usually we say pain in the ass, pain in the neck is not really common. However, pain in the ass is very informal) Oh, well, it's true that the pain in my fingers is getting worse than ever before day after day, so...if it couldn't recover from the pain in a few weeks, I might make time to see a doctor and let's might do that.
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    July 9, 2017
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