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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th(writing about having a pain in my fingers) I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th So, have you ever had pain in your finngers? Speaking about me, I have somehow pain in my fingers right now, rather than, My fingers had gone to sleep. Here, It's 9:43AM, in the morning, I wake up and had breakfast right 2 hours ago. I thought that this pain would go away from my fingers, yet, to my sadness, it haven't done that right now. On google, it says I have to go sse a doctor, but when I heard so like this "go see a doctor" or "you take a medichine immediately", I always think that there would be no other way of saying so than. Of course, I know, I have to see the doctor as soon as possible, but I couldn't get around to do that easily, and more than anything, doing this is really pain in the neck. Oh, well, it's true that the pain in my fingers is getting worse than ever before day and day, so...if it couldn't recover from the pain in a few week, I might make time to see a doctor and let's might do that.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th(writing about having a pain in my fingers)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th

So, have you ever had pain in your finngers fingers? Speaking about me, I have somehow have pain in my fingers right now, rather than,.  My fingers had gone to sleep. Here, It's it's 9:43AM, in the morning,. I wake woke up and had breakfast right 2 hours ago. I thought that this pain would go away from my fingers, yet, to my sadness, it haven't hasn't done that right now yet. On google, it says I have to go sse see a doctor, but when I heard so like this "go see a doctor" or "you take a medichine medicine immediately", I always think that there would be no other way of saying so than (not sure what you are trying to say here). Of course, I know,  I have to see the doctor as soon as possible, but I couldn't get around to can't do that easily, and.  More than anything, doing this is really a pain in the neck. Oh, well, it's true that the pain in my fingers is getting worse than ever before day and by day, so...if it couldn't recover from the pain in a few week the pain doesn't go away in a few weeks(you don't recover from pain, you recover from injury), I might make time to see a doctor and let's might do that.


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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th(writing about having a pain in my fingers)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th

So, have you ever had pain in your fingers? Speaking about me, I have somehow pain in my fingers right now, rather than, My fingers had gone to sleep. Here, It's 9:43AM, in the morning, I woke up and had breakfast right 2 hours ago. I thought that this pain would go away from my fingers, yet, to my sadness, it hasn't done that right now. On google, it says I have to go see a doctor, but when I heard so like this "go see a doctor" or "you take a medichine immediately", I always think that there would be no other way of saying so than. Of course, I know, I have to see the doctor as soon as possible, but I couldn't get around to do that easily, and more than anything, doing this is really pain in the neck(usually we say pain in the ass, pain in the neck is not really common. However, pain in the ass is very informal) Oh, well, it's true that the pain in my fingers is getting worse than ever before day after day, so...if it couldn't recover from the pain in a few weeks, I might make time to see a doctor and let's might do that.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.9th(writing about having a pain in my fingers) So, have you ever had pain in your fingers? Speaking about me, I somehow have pain in my fingers right now, rather than. My fingers had gone to sleep. Here, it's 9:43AM, in the morning. I woke up and had breakfast right 2 hours ago. I thought that this pain would go away from my fingers, to my sadness, it hasn't done that right yet. On google, it says I have to go see a doctor, but when I heard so like this "go see a doctor" or "you take a medicine immidiately", I always think that there would be no choice but to do so. Of course, I know, I have to see the doctor as soon as possible, but I can't do that easily. More than anything, doing this is really a pain in the neck. Oh, well, it's true that the pain in my fingers is getting worse than ever before day by day, so...if I couldn't recover feom injury in a few week, I might manage to make time to see a doctor and let's might do that.

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